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Hi,又到了一起聊雅思学习的时间了,每次都和大家做一些考试后的总结,今天咱们就以一种轻松的方式来,直接看看原版考题吧!
Hi,又到了一起聊雅思学习的时间了,每次都和大家做一些考试后的总结,今天咱们就以一种轻松的方式来,直接看看原版考题吧!
TOPIC (写作)
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
参考考生文章:
All of us agree that all University students have maind can. They use to think and choose a way life. The governments need to be better in the future.
The big question? How can we found the answer to realize interested students and the government?
First of all, who the some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. They are experts. The experts could be give us the result suitable for the students, and drew for Them the good choose. Also, should be The government put plan for future. For example, How many pailot, How many teatcher or tuter the country need. Moreover, In schools, help students for choose what they like of job. Furthermore, coumet all the Minstortogather. (together much better)>>>免费定制专属留学申请方案
On the other hand, I think not good idea a drew the way for students. Such as,take who finish study in school to study subject we like not what he like. Andthes same as me. When I was student, me tuter told me “please study computer science”, and my do not like computer science. Now, I will study another subject, I have aim and I can do what I like. I agree with people. Who said only be allowed to study another subject. I have aim and I can do what I like. I agree with people. Who said only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future.>>>留学免费答疑咨询
In conclusion, I would like to say that the students have maind. They with our recommend to them. They will be live one of the good lives in countries also the I hop you.
参考评语:
这篇文章只有232个单词,字数就没有达到要求,很难了解学生想表达的思想,因为他的立场非常不清晰,似乎只是回答了题目当中的部分内容。而且还有一些拼写和语法的错误。>>>评估申请条件
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