唠唠托福作文的二三注意事项 高分模板绝对要准备

托福写作有个模板备用很重要。尤其在开头段，结尾段以及中间各段的衔接，找到了漂亮的句式就从此永远用这个不要再改了，这就是自己独家的写作模板。每段的第一句尤其要精彩一点，试着尝试倒装句，或用被动语态，总之别写干巴巴的简单句、主动句，这样给考官的感觉就是你接下来的论述也没有可期待之处。

例子不在于多而在于精，举出来之后要充分挖掘它的内涵，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到和生活、和自己紧密相联的点上，这才是体现写作水平的地方。不过如果论述是弱项的话，那还是多举一些具体例子然后把每一个都说几句，那样可以扬长避短，在字数上也不会吃亏，拿到一个比较好的分数还是很有希望的。

平时托福写作备考中练习的时候，可以用尽量多的句式，多尝试，找到适合自己的，既能记住，又能灵活运用，限时模考的时候就开始逐渐找到自己的句式表达和段落结构，形成自己固定的模板套路，也就是个人的托福写作风格。

这里为大家推荐一篇美国人地道的托福独立写作作为参考。

【佳作赏析】

Topic 3 Has the easiness of cooking improved life？

People work hard to fulfill their principal necessities， and food is the one thing that is really important to their survival. Although sometimes belied by other things that seem important， food is the core objective that drives all people to work. But the outcome of the efforts of these people is not a direct supply of food； rather it is in the form of money. Thus these people use the money they obtain to prepare their food.

In old days， preparing food was cumbersome and timeconsuming work for those who do it solely for eating purposes. This kind of preparing food in due tie could not comply with the kind of life people lead today. The use of technological advancement makes preparing food practical even for the clumsiest person. This helps a great deal for those who work against time to make their living. It also avoids the waste of considerable amount of money from hiring a cook.

The development in the preparation of food is highly effective for those people who have no know how of it. A person who does not know how to prepare his/her own food would go to a restaurant or some other place where food is served everyday. But with the advanced food preservation technology， now he is free， completely independent of restaurants and other places. He can prepare his own food and enjoy the feeling of "home， sweet home".

For people at work， life has just become easy for them. They will not have to worry all day long about what they are going to prepare for their supper. They can fully concentrate on their jobs， and work with a mind full of peace. In general this new way of preparing food has helped those who are concerned about their daily meals -- almost everyone. Not only that， it would enlighten those who are frustrated with their jobs just because of the worry of that tiresome work -- preparing food.