雅思写作高分攻略——增加语言表达生动性

雅思考试听、说、读、写四门科目中，对于中国学生来说写作是弱势项目。根据四项评分标准，学生在经过基础、强化课程后对于TA（应题）与CC（结构与段落内论述逻辑）两项要求有明显进步；但是，对于LR（词汇量及准确性）与GR（语法结构与准确性）两项较为薄弱。特别是对于要求写作6分以上的学生，流畅自然的语言表达、丰富多样的句型更是必不可少的学习要点。本文将列举常见集中增加语言表达生动性的方法，以供考生备考及老师备课。

一、 避免使用语意较弱的“BE”动词——少用简单的主系表结构

（1） 表语转换为各种不同形式的修饰语。

e.g. This method is effective and it is helpful to the students.

Revision:  The effective methods benefit students. (表语转化成前置形容词；表语转换成行为动词)

（2） 表语转换为动词

e.g. His academic performance is as good as expected by his parents.

Revision: His academic performance meets his parents’ expectation.

（3） There be 句型改写（Be动词后的名词改为句子的主语）

e.g. There is no opportunity for promotion。

Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

二、 避免使用MAKE, LET, HELP词组，多用语意具体的动词。

e.g. Technology makes the poor easier to become rich.

Revision: Technology bridges the gap between the poor and the rich.

e.g. Telecommuting lets employees feel relaxed.

Revision: Employees work under less pressure and enjoy a relaxing atmosphere by Telecommuting.

三、 避免使用笼统词汇表达，增加分类话题词汇深度

e.g. some TV programs can enlarge audience’s knowledge.

Revision: some TV programs, especially, the quiz show, can enlarge audience’s knowledge.

e.g. Soldiers will benefit from the technological equipment during disaster.

Revision: Soldiers will benefit from the communications equipment during natural disaster.

以上简单介绍了三种增加雅思写作语言表达生动性的方法，主要为表语的多样性变化，THERE BE 句型变化、学生常用MAKE, LET等词汇具象性表达及用下义词及形容词避免笼统词汇的表达。除以上三类，学生还需注意避免使用语意冗长累赘的词语，及滥用一些陈旧词语或者难懂的专业术语。语言的提升是漫长的过程，学生需注意平时的积累，老师在学生习作中应注重学生语言表达的纠正。

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