雅思写作，如何在观点思路不变的情况下提高语言表达？

　　以下题为例:

　　An increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

　　一、支持观点

　　1.学习异国文化，促进交流

　　“屌丝”版本:We can learn more foreign culture and communicate/talk with others.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Learning more foreign culture and communicating with others is a factor that can never be easily ignored.

　　诀窍：在原句中提炼关键词：learn foreign culture/ communicate，变成动名词，做新句子的主语。

　　2.锻炼心智，促进成长，培养独立能力

　　“屌丝”版本:You can grow mentally and make progress. You can take care of yourself.

　　“高富帅”的版本:That you can take care of yourself deserves/warrants our attention.

　　诀窍：原句前加that，瞬间变主语从句，一秒钟拉长句子。

　　3.开拓眼界

　　“屌丝”版本:We can open our eyes. / We can broaden our horizon.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Our horizon can be broadened. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

　　诀窍：主动变被动，客观正式。

　　4.提升求职竞争力

　　“屌丝”版本:We can improve career competitiveness/in the job market.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Improvement of/in career competitiveness is the factor that can never be easily ignored.

　　诀窍：提取关键词improve，变成抽象名词。

　　5.文凭含金量更高

　　“屌丝”版本:A foreign diploma is with higher value/The diploma will be more widely recognized.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Wider recognition is the most frequently quoted reason when asked about why they study abroad.

　　诀窍：提取关键词more widely recognized，变名词词性。

　　6.环境优美

　　“屌丝”版本:The environment will be more beautiful. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

　　“高富帅”的版本:More beautiful environment is among the many advantages of study abroad.

　　诀窍：提取关键词environment, beautiful。

　　7.完善的社会福利

　　“屌丝”版本:They have complete social welfare system/social safety net.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Complete social welfare system can be overseen under no condition.

　　诀窍：提取关键词complete social welfare system。

　　二、反对观点

　　1.孤独，寂寞

　　“屌丝”版本:We will feel lonelier.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Loneliness is what plagues the overseas students. >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

　　诀窍：提取关键词lonely，变名词，并用plague引出缺点。

　　2.种族歧视

　　“屌丝”版本:The local people will laugh at us. /racial discrimination

　　“高富帅”的版本:Racial discrimination makes the life of them difficult.

　　诀窍：提取关键词racial discrimination。

　　3.水土不服

　　“屌丝”版本:We cannot adapt ourselves easily to the new environment physically.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Inhabitability/Being unable to adapt to the new environment makes them suffer.

　　诀窍：提取关键词cannot adapt，两种方式变名词。 >>>【出国留学考试-立即咨询】

　　4.思乡

　　“屌丝”版本:We might miss our hometown.

　　“高富帅”的版本:Homesick plagues those who study abroad.

　　诀窍：抽象出关键性名词homesick。

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