雅思写作“经典”6大开头，切记不要再有！

有些同学考雅思写作的时候自信满满，等到分数出来了之后傻了眼，我写的自我感觉还是ok的呀？除了开头有点没把握好~

这位童鞋，开头没写好给考官的印象会大打折扣哦~阅卷老师连看的兴趣的都没有了，你的分数怎么会高呢？提高雅思写作技巧，写出满意的雅思作文，小编来帮你详细盘点下雅思写作6大切记不要有的开头。

1.废话连篇不知所云

典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the Internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play Internet games. So we can see the Internet is more and more important in our daily life.Topic 3-The importance of environmental protectionOh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!。

2.中式英文人见人晕

典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……Topic 2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice personBeing a nice person have many advantages. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

3.观点模糊态度暧昧

典型失败案例： Topic -Should college students be allowed to get married?I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me…… 

4.偏离主题无轨电车

典型失败案例：Topic -It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

5.过分简单没有重点

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

6.用词不当 表达不准

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?I think college students should not be allowed to get married because the yare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

以上内容就是老师为大家带来的雅思写作6大千万不要有的开头，记住一个好的开头给考官一个好印象希望可是加分项哦~

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