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首先我们可以判定discuss类型的文章,一般问答项为Discuss both views and give your opinion.含有两问。例如:Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however, prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2015.06.06)
In developing countries, some people think the government should introduce new technology to people in order to improve quality of life, while others believe governments should offer free education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2014.09.20)
我们可以看到,此类型题型特征为:题目中会有两类对立或者相异观点,对于discuss类型,写作重点是双边讨论,而作者的个人观点不是主角。所以此类题目考察考生的双向讨论分析能力。
Discuss类型基本框架(共四段):
第一段 开篇段 (少于或等于70个字)(任务:导入话题)
第二段讨论A类人观点 (80-110字)(任务:分析讨论A)
第三段讨论B类人观点 (80-110字) (任务:分析讨论B)
第四段陈述作者本人观点 (40-60字)
开篇段(导入话题)-- Introduction
开篇段的目的就是为了告诉考官,你这一段的目的,在这里,开篇段主要包括两个内容:
1.背景介绍(optional)2.改写题目
在写之前,一定要注意细节,开篇段(审题)--专有名词,形容词,状语
TIPS: 1. 开篇段不用过长
2. 不要出现语法词汇错误
3. 不要抄题
4. 不要使用一些太常用表达
5. 改写题目一定要注意--------不要改变主体含义
背景介绍(审题)一共有四种方法:
1.趋势现象类 :描述一个发生的事实或真相
2. 影响类:强调某个事物对我们的影响
3. 改写前提背景
4.专有名词解释
例如:
Some working parents believe that children centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2015.03.14)
1. Currently, an increasing number of (working parents) focus on a topic about ( who could provide best care for children)趋势现象类背景
Currently, ( who could provide best care for children) has great impacts on (working parents).强调某个事物对我们的影响
题目改写
改写题目则是指原题目中需要改动框架,但是主体意义不变,在这里我们需要改动的部分如下Some working parents believe that children centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job.
改写题目除了上述的标注,注意有四种方法可以用在改写题目中1. 同义词替换2.词性更改3.主被动的转换4.从句之间的转换
例如:Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
首段描写:
Currently, (books) has (profound) impacts on (individuals) and people are able to acquire plenty of knowledge from various books. some people think (printed books, considered as a traditional reading mode, will be replaced by electronic books in the digital era). Some others, however, argue that (printed books are still significant and can not be ignored.)
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