雅思写作当中容易失分的小细节（二）

雅思写作成绩是决定最终总成绩的重要一环，但是同学们普遍在这部分失分比较高，所以小编专门为大家分析大家可能在那部分失分，希望能给同学们带来帮助。

1. 词性使用错误

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介词，而这里构成to do(不定式)，只能用动词。因此，可改为：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays，some students study many subjects in university，which leadsto that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介词，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名词，构成同位语从句：

Nowadays，some students study many subjects in university，which leads tothe fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays，some students studymany subjects in university，which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

2. 从句的误用和滥用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定语，固定句式“the reason why…isthat…”why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句连用，气势磅礴，这就是所谓的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay，I will discuss what those，who are two kinds of peoplein this topic，are how to think and how to choose. 实再迂回婉转，不知所云。

关于当中，容易失分的部分就先给大家分享到这里，如果同学们对感兴趣，或者在雅思备考当中遇到了难题，。另外，信通教育也为大家提供课程，如果同学们基础比较薄弱，可以考虑通过培训的方式提高自己的能力与技巧。