2014年12月6日雅思写作例题

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雅思写作例题分析

Task 1:

The line graph illustrates the average attendance of top-level soccer league in the UK, Germany and Italy from 1980 to 2004.

题目分析：

线图，动态图，重点写趋势，以及三条线之间的对比。

相关练习素材及备考建议：

线图是非常经典的小作文题目，同学们可以参考剑5 test 1，剑7 test2及剑9 test 4.

Task 2

Some think "vertical "City is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think "horizontal" City is better, where there is few tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目类型：双边讨论

提纲：

城市外观	Space, convenience, environment
Vertical city	1. 节约空间 2. 生活便捷，配套服务全 3. 节省通勤时间 4. 减少交通和污染问题
Horizontal city	1. 提供自然的生活空间 2. 更多娱乐、休闲场所和绿地 3. 避免高楼大厦带来的问题

With the fast speed of urbanization and urban sprawl around the world, two modes of city appearance seem prevalent: “vertical city”, where residents live and work in high-rises, and “horizontal city”, where there is virtually no skyscrapers. Which one is more advantageous than the other has become a hot topic of discussion without a consensus till today. (定语从句、主语从句)

Although some downsides of a vertical city such as urban heat island effect, light pollution or over-crowdedness are well aware by those advocates who insist that vertical city is superior, they stick to this belief because high-rise buildings downtown can not only save space which characterizes majority of metropolis, but offer limitless convenience to city dwellers. Since these high building blocks, whether used for living or working, are sufficiently equipped with supporting facilities, such as banks, shopping malls, schools, restaurants which makes life expedient. Commuting time thus can be saved substantially and traffic and pollution problems caused by growing ownership of personal vehicles can be reduced to some extent. （让步状语从句、复合从句、定语从句、原因从句、插入语）

Those who assert horizontal city is more promising might argue that cities with sporadic buildings create a more natural living environment. More public spaces can be utilized to build parks, gardens, squares and even green zones. Residents can then relax and entertain themselves closer to the nature in their leisure time. Many issues resulted from a vertical city therefore can be lessened. （定语从句、宾语从句）

Personally I think it is unrealistic these days to only construct low-rise buildings in a city, especially in a major city where crowds of people flock into. Space restriction is another consideration when design a new city. For cities with long history, some traditional low buildings should be well preserved while skyscrapers are encouraged in the new development zones. （插入语、介宾独立主格、并列句） (287 words)

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