教师版：2014年10月18日雅思写作解析

小作文：流程图，8个stages写smoked fish的制作过程;

小作文这周如预料考到流程图，上周（10.11）考中表格，再上次（10.2）考中柱形图，再前一周（9.27）继续表格，再就是9月20号的地图题，间隔四周。那么饼形图和线图必将是下次小作文准备的重点题型。

大作文：It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the other culture. we can learn as much as from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

我们现在没有必要去其他地方旅游来学习当地文化。从书里，电影里和网上我们也能获得同样多的相应信息。

这周的大作文没有难到学生下不了手，旅游学习文化这个话题在社会生活类，政府类都有接触，并且本文提到从书里，电影里和网络里学习其他地方的文化，又是大家熟悉的多元媒体和科技类话题。对于烤鸭来说，词汇和思路应该不缺，但是本文的难点是学生想不到比较亲自旅游和从多元媒体获得文化的差异；并且此文容易写的空洞，抽象，没有具体具象地展现两种方式学习文化的各自优缺点。

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这里提供一些思路，仅供参考：

1. 观点倾向于亲身旅游来增长见识是很有必要的，不能被多元媒体等方式来取代。

2. 亲身旅游不等同于只是乘坐交通工具和住旅馆；而是通过和当地人的语言交流，品尝当地食物等活动，我们不仅获得对当地文化的一手认识， 而且我们在旅游过程中也能与当地居民和其他游客进行沟通联系，这些是多元媒体这种二手信息里没有的并且缺乏的。

3. 亲身旅游能够亲密接触到大自然和人文景观，而目前电影电视里，就算是I-MAX和其他先进的电脑技术发展都还是有限的，对于人们认知文化有着负面影响。

词汇：

1. Interaction:互动

2. Sense of isolation:疏离感

3. Landscape:风景，景色

4. Multi-media:多元媒体

5. Three dimensional:立体的

6. Recognition:认识，认知

7. Undermine: 破坏，危害

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范文参考：

Granted that cultures in various countries start to resemble one another, which is by no means to a large extent, it is still worthwhile to travel to other countries to appreciate what can only be obtained on a foreign soil.

Superficially, the world’s culture is merging faster than we expected or could tolerate. That is partly why people get the same experience no matter where they go. If travel means to get on a plane, to stay in some hotel, to go to some museums and to do some shopping, then it could be quite alike in all major cities around the world. But traveling should not be limites to this narrow sense. It means much more and therefore renders each trip a new experience.

To travel is to get to know the local people. People may wear the same clothes, eat the same kinds of food and do similar jobs, but they are different from country to country, an ordinary Chinese could hardly believe that a totally stranger in America will dismantle his own bike and replace your ruptured tyre with one of his own if he has never been to that country. Media reports and second-hand information can never compare with your personal interaction with the local people during your stay there.

Apart from knowing the people ,traveling affords you incomparable opportunities to appreciate the natural beauties of a foreign country. Admittedly, the internet, satellite TV and multi-media technology are bringing the world closer to us. It is now easy to view exotic landscapes on a  screen in the comfort of your home; virtual reality technology promises three dimensional experiences at the touch of a fingertip. However, is this various experience really satisfying? Hardly. Travel brings us closer to nature, the wonders of which can only be truly appreciated first hand.

There is hope that technology will one day supply all the experiences we ever wish to have, which sounds exhilarating yet perhaps also disconcerting-it reminds me of the movie The Matrix. Also, people will remain unique enough to excite our desire to meet them in person.

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