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题目：It is important that towns and cities are attractive so money should spend on works of art ( like paintings and statues) in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (words= 326 )

题目分析：城市成为吸引人的地方是很重要的，因此钱应该花在公共场所的艺术品上。多大程度上同意还是不同意?

关键词分析：

背景关键词：Towns, cities, attractive place

论点观点词： money --on works of art – public places.

观点： 不同意

为增加城市魅力，Money 应该花在：1、住房条件；2、增加学习工作机会。

思路分析+范文：

第一段： 社会背景+正向/反向观点+自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因)

社会背景： 城市中——丰富的教育资源以及工作机会——吸引人们

正向观点：一些人认为——钱花在艺术品上——为增加城市魅力

自己观点： 我认为 合理做法1改善住房条件 2 增加机会

The affluent educational resources and job opportunities in conurbations and towns are what drive most people from other regions. Some people deem funds should be invested in works of art to aggrandize cities’ attraction. However, after serious consideration, I am convinced that a more reasonable and practical way to strengthen urban appeal is the investment in improving housing conditions and increasing opportunities.

第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论

论点： 注资改善住房条件——提升——城市的魅力指数。

论据： 住房问题的解决 ——是——评价城市魅力的标准之一。

例证： 以北京为例，大部分来北京工作，上学人，因为没有自己的住房，而缺乏对于城市的认可以及满意度，甚至，缺乏安全感以及归属感, 更不用说城市的吸引力。

结论：改善住房条件——是城市的吸引力—— 的重要因素。

Injecting funds in improving housing conditions can pull up the glamour index of metropolises and towns. In other words, the settlement of housing issues is one of the criteria to value charm in a city. For instance, in Beijing, the majority of people without houses tend to lack recognition of and satisfaction to the city，without any sense of security and belonging, let alone being attracted by it. Hence，improved housing conditions can be a vital factor to appeal.

第三段： 论点+论据+例证+结论

论点：投资增加就业，学习机会——是——城市吸引力另一种方式。

论据: 很多人涌入城市——由于—— 城市中的实现价值发挥才能的机会。

例证： 政府应在大城市建立了更多的高校，为人们提供了更好的学习资源。此外，政府招商引资的方式，在城市中引进更过多的企业，提供了人们提供大量的工作机会。

结论：宽广平台的构建——是——城市吸引人们的关键。

To invest in increasing employment and learning opportunities is another way to gain charm. Conspicuously, a growing number of people flooding into conurbations is due to the fact that they have opportunities there to realize their own values and become capable. For example, the government established more colleges and universities in big cities to provide better learning resources. Besides, introduction of more substantial enterprises by the way of investment incentives has furnished a mass of employment chances. Hence, construction of a broadened platform is the key to attracting people.

第四段：

让步段：另一种观点合理性+however+对此观点反驳

另一种观点合理性：

钱花在公共场所艺术品上有其合理性 1 增添城市的人文气息 2 改善区域面貌

反驳观点：

钱应用于解决城市中所存在的基本问题——增强其吸引力，因为1 基于人们的生存发展的实际需求 2 城市的自身发展。

Spending money on works of art in public places has its own rationality, which is conducive to adding a humanistic flavor and improving the display of a region. However, funds should be utilized on subsistent essential issues to heighten the appeal of the region, in view of actual demands of people for survival and development as well as urban development and growth.

第五段：总结观点+提出建议

总结观点：改善住房条件+机会的增加——提升城市吸引力——根本所在

提出建议： 各国政府——建立相关的体制——增加公共场所的艺术气息

In brief, improvement of housing conditions and addition of opportunities are fundamental to those regions’ appeal. Meanwhile, the government should also establish relative system to add an artistic atmosphere in public places.