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2013-11-19 来源：新通外语网igo99.cn 作者：吴金叶阅读量：人喜欢手机阅读

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大家都知道，雅思写作是一项语言输出工作，很考验烤鸭们的真正运用英语的能力，只有用地道书面的语言把自己的想法清晰的表达出来，并且需要用impressive的语言把可能与别人相同的想法或思路展现给考官，才能拿到desirable 的成绩。

大家都知道，雅思写作是一项语言输出工作，很考验烤鸭们的真正运用英语的能力。在考场上，看懂一个题目并及时给出观点是不够的，我们还要用地道书面的语言把我们的内心的全部想法清晰的表达出来，并且需要用impressive的语言把可能与别人相同的想法或思路展现给考官，这样才能保证拿到desirable 的成绩。那么，我们就分别从2个方面入手：词，句。

高频词汇

首先看看“词”。如果烤鸭们备考的时间充裕的话，应该先从词下手。雅思写作词汇不在于多，不在于深，而在于多样性，灵活性和恰当性。我们可以归纳并熟记写作常用词汇的同义替换，以下是个人总结的部分写作高频词汇替换：

Good: favorable/ beneficial/ desirable/ wholesome /positive

Bad: negative/ unfavorable/ undesirable/ unwholesome/ irrational/ insensible / destructive/ catastrophic

Enough: sufficient/ adequate/abundant

A lot of: a wide range of / a great diversity of / a great variety of ……….

More and more: increasing/ growing/ rising

May/will: be likely to/ tend to/ show a tendency to/ incline to

Should: be supposed to/ be expected to

Have to: be forced to/ be compelled to / have no alternative but to do

Cause: trigger/ give rise to / induce/ contribute to

Affect: exert/ constitute …. Effects / implications/ impacts on

Use: adopt/ employ/ apply/ take advantage of/ make optimal use of/ utilize/ popularity/ prevalence

Prevent: restrain/ refrain/ discourage …. From doing sth

Lack: absence/ deficiency/ scarcity/ absence/ shortage

Health: physical and psychological well being/ fitness/ soundness

Seriousness: severity/ deterioration/ exacerbation/ aggravation

Pollution: contamination

Success: personal achievement/ accomplishment/ gratifying results

Successful: distinguished/ prominent/ eminent/ outstanding

Mature: sophisticated

Too much contact with: excessive exposure to

Be faced with：be confronted with

Take some measures: adopt some rules and regulations/ enforce some strategies

Pay attention to: place a premium on / give priority to /attach much emphasis on

Make some realize: raise/ arouse/ enhance sb’s awareness

Spend money on: invest in/ provide financial support to / funds/ budgetSpend too much time on: be obsessed with/ be fascinated with/ get addicted to / indulge in / revel in ; be occupied with

我们来具体试用上面几个短语：

如在教育类，科技类及社会类话题经常会考到学生是否该花很多时间在玩游戏上，人们是否花太多时间在工作上时，题目里经常出现的字眼就是“spend too much time on sth”, 我们首段改写题目时就可以说 teenagers are so fascinated with various forms of entertainment, including playing computer games/ an increasing number of working people are fully occupied with their job.

语句优化

其次，我们再来看一下句子。句子的练习方式有很多：中英翻译，英英改写及句子扩写等。个人认为如果语法及词汇比较缺的同学可以先从句子翻译练起，虽然可能过程比较痛苦，但是效果会比较好。当然，中英翻译最好有人指导着去练习并且要有较好的参考句子才可以。有了一定的语言基础（句子书写基本没有语法错误，写作基本词汇具备）的情况下，可以英英改写或是句子扩写。下面附上几个教学过程中经常讲的句子练习：

1.中英翻译

A. 大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

参考答案：

Most students believe that part-time job provides them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which exerts a favorable impact on their future employment/ thereby placing them in a favorable position in terms of future employment.

解析：

1) 很多学生会在第一时间把发展人际交往能力写成：Communication skills；把对….有好处写成：be good for .如果让他们再说出几个可以替换的，有些学生就词穷了。

2)很多学生会把这个长句子写成 run-on 的语法错误，这里可强调 which 从句的使用；如果本句内重点要突出对未来工作的好处，可使用thereby 句型。

B. 现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

参考答案：

It is generally accepted （acknowledged）that no university is likely to impart all of knowledge

to students when they graduate.

解析：

“人们普遍认为”的直译版本为：As we all know, as everyone knows

“能够”的直译版本为:Can，“教”的直译版本为:Teach，其实，考生可以利用细节体现自己的语言水平，就像参考例句的版本。

C. 近些年，越来越多的父母要求他们的孩子接受额外教育。

参考答案：

i. There is a growing trend for parents to ask their children to receive extra education.

ii. An increasing number of parents ask their children to receive extra education.

解析：

学生对 “越来越多的” 标准答案是 “more and more”. 如果掌握了句型 there is growing trend for sb to do sth, 就可以直观的展示出另一种表达方式并且有效的避免一些语法错误。另外，此句型可举一反三引出：There is a growing recognition about sth/that +从句 -----

There is a growing recognition about the significance of tertiary education.

D. 现在有很多环境问题，比如区域性的森林砍伐和温室效应。

参考答案：

The recent decades have witnessed a great variety of environmental problems, ranging fromregional deforestation to global warming.

解析：

一般说到 “现在有…”，最直接的翻译是 there be 句型； “很多”是 a lot of/many; “举例”是such as. 参考答案更能体现学生的语言基础应用能力。

2.英英改写

A. Nowadays, we can see a lot of advertisements.

参考答案：Living in this information age, people are bombarded with substantial numbers of advertisements

B. Advertising tells us much information so we can have many choices to buy things.

参考答案：Advertising informs people of more alternative products, allowing prospective consumers to make a rational buying decision according to their needs.

C. People now care about quality.

参考答案： Quality is, in most cases, a primary concern to people

D. Advertisements, such as billboards, TV commercials and flyers make those who do not want to buy things buy a lot of things.

参考答案：Advertisements, ranging from billboards, TV commercials to flyers turn unintended/ unintentional window shoppers successfully into impulsive buyers.

3.句子扩写

A. Modern society is marked by environmental problems, ranging from global warming, deforestation, the loss of soil and water (soil erosion), and the depletion of fossil fuels to mass species extinction (the depletion of habitats of wildlife.)

B. Daily life is overwhelmed with many advertisements, including TV commercials, billboards, flyers and brochures.

C. The prevalence of technological facilities , such as various means of transports and telecommunication devices, makes it possible for individuals to conduct many tasks efficiently without the constraints of geography and time

D. Mass media, such as the Internet, TV, newspapers and magazines, present us with substantial amounts of information which greatly disorient learners of all ages.

如果我们有了以上较好的备考过程，必定能很高效的积累写作必备词汇及句型，让我们的思路通过一个良好的载体—语言清晰透彻的分析一个话题。自然，我们理想的写作分数也就不会再是空中楼阁。

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【成功案例】
温州中学学生仇X，2011年报了新通暑期雅思强化课程，经过2个月的强化训练和单独的VIP特训，最终取得了单科写作7分，总分7分的好成绩。