雅思写作评分标准的深度解读——写作6分的秘诀

标准1：TR (T ask Response)

常见错误1：没有回答所有问题
例1:：Many people have chosen to move from rural areas to cities. Why has this happened? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

例2：Some people argue that it is important to ban advertisements aimed at children. Some people think advertising gives parents useful information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

常见错误2：忽视题目重心
例1：Fast food restaurants have increased around the world. Some people argue that it has a negative effect on both families and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

例2：Some people argue that unpaid community service should be added to high schools, because it is as important as academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

常见错误3：忽视对比和比较
例：The government should spend money on public facilities rather than support artistic projects or artists. Do you agree or disagree?

常见错误4：论述中不断重复一个观点，不加以解释和论述
例: It is argued that parents play a larger part in children's development than schools, especially for preschool fit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

学生的论述段落 : Parents are important in shaping children's perception of the world. It is clear that many children's behaviour and ideas are affected by parents. If parents do not behave well, their behaviour can have a negative effect on children. This will affect children's success in adulthood.

常见错误5：段落中间有很多观点，但是没有进行分类和逐个论述。
例1：The Olympics can create a lot of economic benefits and also benefit people’s health. People can practise sports every day. They can earn more money because of job opportunities. With physical fitness, they can perform their job very well. Their income will also increase, good for the whole country.

例2：International travel can yield many benefits. First, it creates revenues and brings jobs. Second, it can connect a country with the rest of the world. Third, local people will be exposed to different ideas and cultures. Fourth, some cultural sites can be well protected.

标准2：CC （Coherence and Cohesion）

常见错误1：段落中间没有明确的中心句,论述过程没有明确的中心思想。

例：Children are too young to distinguish right from wrong. They watch television every day and do not study. They drop out of schools or fight with their peers. It is true that television viewing Is not good for children.

常见错误2：连接词过多使用，使用错误或者使用不恰当。
例：It is undeniable that the government should spend money on art. This is because the government has a lot of money. Obviously, art is important to our fife. However, other things cannot be as important as art to us. It comes as no surprise that many countries in the world have spent a lot of money on art.

常见错误3：使用冗长的套句
例：Education has become one of the most controversial issues around the world while many people have a hard time reaching a consensus on the importance of moral education.

常见错误4：代词使用不正确
例1：They should pay more attention to education. Parents can spend more time playing with children, and they will feel happier and can lead a fulfilling life. A child who has a happy life can improve his behavior at school.

例2：Children today are spoilt in material ways by their parents. They may not know what matters most in their lives.

常见错误5：段落要么太长(6-7句话），要么太短(2-3句话)，或者分段的地方不对。
例Individuals and businesses should pay for the clean-up of pollution. If individuals are not held responsible for their behaviour, they will continue to pollute the environment. The government's spending can improve the environment, but it sooner or later runs out oil money. If companies are required to pay for pollution reduction methods, they will be more careful about their behaviour.
In addition, if companies and individuals do not bear any cost, they do not have motivation to be environmentally friendly.

标准3： LR （Lexical Resource）

常见错误1：误解单词的词性
例：The crime rate will arise continuously.

常见错误2：单词的使用错
例：Advertising is a good way to propagandise products.

常见错误3：单词的搭配错误
例：The government should improve citizens' awareness

常见错误4：用词重复
Working at home is useful for employees. They can manage their time flexibly if they are allowed to work at home. Working at home is particularly important for those who cannot work on a full-time basis.

标准4：GRA  (Grammatical Range and Accuracy)

常见错误：单句太多
例：Advertising is important. It allows people to get information about products. They can make better decisions. This can save money and improve efficiency.

常见错误2：句子没有连词，或者成分残缺
例：Many parents are too busy today, therefore, they do not communicate with children very often.

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