雅思高分作文有哪些特点？

今天为大家分享的是作文的特点，希望看完这些高分作文的标准之后，能给同学们的写作带来帮助。

3.指示代词的准确使用

中文和英文在指示代词上有较大的区别。中文习惯重复名词，而英文则强调用代词。如‘我今天把钱包丢了，我那个钱包可好看了。’而相对应的英文表达是使用代词而不再重复钱包这个名词， ‘I lost my purse today, and it was so cute.’ 或者 ‘I lost my purse, which was so cute.’流畅度高的文章指示代词使用正确，指向清楚。下面这两句话当中有两个代词it，但是存在指代不清的问题：

Government’s investment is always the focus that people pay more attention to. Recently, itbecomes a controversy that whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions.

前一个it指代后面whether从句，后一个it指代government.为了理清关系，减少模糊，最好不用形式主语这个句型，而是直接把主语从句放在主语的位置上。修改如下：

Government’s budget is always the attention focus of the public. Whether it should support the athletes to join the worldwide competitions causes controversy.

4.段落的中心内容与中心句

一个段落只有一个中心思想，这个中心思想通常会体现在一个总结性的句子当中，这句话叫做中心句。中心句在学术文章中常常落在段首，以方便阅读。中心句如同射击的靶子，要直指文章主题，这样后面的论点才不会偏离题目，因此非常重要。上面关于看电视太多的段落，中心句就写的非常明确。下面再给同学们一些句子，可以灵活应用于立论段，即证明自己观点的段落。

It is hard to argue with the fact that workers are the direct/ first beneficiaries of this working fashion.

There is no doubt that many employees would favour/welcome telework.

Statistics show that there are few things which impact the human mind more than mass media.

The mass media hold a large share of importance in society.

A life without the presence of mass media would seem improbable for many.

However, this does not mean that …

下面是一些可以用于让步段的中心句：

there are certainly some minor downsides in 。。。

I admit that … is not perfect.

I understand why some people oppose 。。。

Of course there are some opposite voices against 。。

the disapproving voices also sound reasonable.

It is natural to regard a university as a phase preparing for a future job…

the other side of the argument is also valid.

Surely pushing their children towards academic study makes sense for parents.

You cannot be honest without admitting ….

关于写作就先跟大家分享到这里，如果同学们对于雅思考试或者感兴趣，。练习是长期的事情，需要动口动手和动脑，如果同学们只一味的看高高分作文而自己不动手写练习的话，自己作文水平提高不会太快。

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