雅思写作中容易失分的几个细节（一）

以下就是小编今天给大家分享的同学们经常在当中容易失分的细节部分，同学们可以对照自己的情况，看看自己的当中有没有这些小问题。

 雅思作文——句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主语是the most popular kind of transport，谓语动词(系动词)是was，而byroad按照语法应该是方式状语，此句缺乏表语。

应改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits，which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories，不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思，应改为：

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

雅思作文—— 双谓语错句

There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型，因为句中的be动词已经是谓语，而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分，故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”，根据上面的分析，were应该是谓语，而study for career应该是定语从句，因此，例句应修正改成：

For those under 26，there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26，there were 80% students studying for career.

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives. 应改成：

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives

篇幅原因，细节问题本篇就先给大家分享到这里，希望同学们能在平常的当中注意这些细节。魔鬼藏在细节里，可能不知道什么时候就在你不经意间犯下的一个小错误就对你的带来影响。当然，新通教育为大家提供课程，如果同学们在雅思备考方面时间不足，可以考虑通过雅思培训来迅速提升。