今天给大家介绍下雅思写作中大作文advatange/disadvantage类文章的写法，并且学习下雅思写作考官满分范文，以及给同学们举一个同学真考实例避免错误写法。首先我们来了解一下雅思大作文的四种问法：
1.Agree （In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?）
2.Discuss （Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.？ Discuss both views and give your own opinion.）
3.Report （In many countries, more and more young people are leaving schools and unable to find jobs after graduation. What do you think youth unemployment青年失业问题 will cause to the individual and the society? And make some suggestions.）
4.Advantages/disadvantages （Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?）
在最近一段时间的雅思考试中，此类题目出现频率也是比较高的，所以我们需要重点关注下这类题目的具体写法。关于第四道题目也就是玩游戏到底是缺点多还是优点多这个问题，有的同学可能会想写成玩游戏好，然后主体段只写优点完全不提及缺点（合作意识/更聪明），或者写成玩游戏不好主体段只写缺点不提及优点（身体健康带来问题/影响孩子学习），但是这是否是最好的写作方式呢，我们一起来看一下雅思考官是如何回答这个问题的。
按照这样的思路，这篇文章究竟应该怎么写呢，我们一起来看看考官是如何写这种类型的文章的：
考官满分范文：
Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.
通过对这篇文章的分析，我们发现写这类文章的时候，优点缺点都要去写，如果认为有点多，那么写优点那段放在第三段的位置。相反，如果认为缺点更多，那么缺点那段放在第三段的位置即可。大家不难看出，如果你只写优点或者缺点，你会很难写满，所以大家之后在遇见这类型文章的时候，可以参考这样的文章结构进行写作。
模仿上面那篇考官范文，大家可以思考下下面这篇文章的具体写法：
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Here's our plan for a 4-paragraph essay:
1.Introduction: Topic = best age to learn a foreign language. Our opinion = better to learn at primary school age.
2.Disadvantages of learning languages at primary age: other subjects are more important at that age (maths, mother tongue language, science), learning a new language is confusing and wastes time, could delay development of child's first language.
3.Advantages of learning languages at primary age: young children learn faster, they are less self-conscious or shy, they pick up the pronunciation better, they enjoy copying and learning through games, nowadays languages are just as important as maths etc.
4.Conclusion: repeat / summarise our answer
此类题目，学生作文中存在的问题分析：
Some museums charge visitors for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
这是一篇真考过的文章，真实考试中分数是5.5分。那么这篇文章存在的问题首先是词数不到，大概只有220左右，主要原因还是在主体段没有充分展开。另外二三段总起句不够突出，也就是说我们最好在二三段的第一句话把我们要讲的内容先进行概述，最后一段词数过多，最后一段在真实考试中只需要重申下自己的观点即可，所以，大家在真考中要注意避免这些问题，多多模仿考官的文章来进行写作~
