雅思写作高分范文解析：教育类话题

雅思写作教育类话题：2016年2月13日雅思写作真题

Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school, do you think the benefits of home schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

王杰老师提醒考生一定注意审题。这篇题目考生很有可能看到了“在家教孩子”和“送去学校”后就想当然的写成了一段说在家教学，另一段说送学校如何如何，这样就偏题了。题目最后问的实际上是“在家教学的利与弊”，因此我们只需要单单分析“在家教学”就可以了。

另外在雅思写作的过程中一定要表明自己的观点，无论是在开头或者结尾，观点一定要明确。论证要有理有据，且论据之间要紧密的同时又有层次感。在词汇和语法上，可以在保证准确性的前提上尽可能的发挥。

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雅思写作教育类话题高分范文解析：

Nowadays various ways have emerged for children to be educated, among which home schooling became one of the most popular choices. I am of the view that the limitation of home education overrides its advantages.

解析：在开头表明态度。非限制性定语从句的运用，emerge，override等动词运用，limitation是对于drawback的替换。

There can be little doubt that children who are exclusively educated at home could be taught in accordance of their aptitude. For instance, parents can adjust their teaching strategies based on children’s academic performance of different subjects, promoting their learning efficiency. Besides, such a convenient method also saves plenty of time, which would allow students to learn more than those at school.

解析：主体段第一段为让步段，简单的写自己观点的反方观点，通过两个分观点来阐述，分别通过举例，因果来论证。短语in accordance of their aptitude, 副词exclusively, 非谓语动词表示结果，定语从句的运用都是亮点。

However, the disadvantage of domestic learning cannot be ignored. Above all, the information reliability of parents is questionable. Unlike qualified teachers, most parents have not been trained professionally and thus cannot guarantee the authoritativeness of information. Hence the possibility that children may be misled is concerned. Also, those educated at home might be incapable of cooperating with other students since they have no opportunities to do group assignments or interact with others, giving the stress that team players are in urgent need in modern society. Last but not the least, it should be noted that network, which is essential to the development of individuals, is neglected in this case. Studying at home could give rise to isolation from their peers and lack of exposure to social network will prevent them from becoming the well-rounded talents they could have been.

解析：主体段第二段为支持的观点，应该着重去写，采用三条论据，并通过对比论证，因果论证，反面论证来支撑主观点。
注意绿色字体标注的衔接词，当内容比较多的时候，段落内部要保持层次清晰。小小的代词有时候可以起到“暗承”的作用，让层次之间练习紧密。除了不同结构来展示语法的多样性以外，本段的高阶词汇和短语（红色字体）是很大的加分项。

To conclude, despite the advantages of this new way of education, I still believe that home schooling does more harm than good and formal education at school is irreplaceable. Not only academic knowledge but also soft skills are necessary for students to achieve abundant accomplishments. To obtain these skills, children need to step into an open world rather than a comparatively closed environment.

解析：末段再一次强调立场并且做总结。

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雅思写作教育类话题常用词汇：

获取知识：acquire/gain/attain/obtain/get access to knowledge
掌握技能：grasp skills
培养道德和美德：cultivate morality and virtue
培养守法公民：nurture law-abiding citizens
培养沟通技能：develop communicative skills
拓展潜力：expand one’s potential
激发学习兴趣和动力：stimulate learning interests and motivation
参与教学活动：participate in/take part in/get involved in teaching activities
学以致用：apply the knowledge into practice
找到得体高薪的工作：get decent and well-paid jobs
树立积极的世界观：shape a positive world view
分辨是非黑白：distinguish right from wrong
个性：individuality
传授，灌输：instruct, impart … to …, imbue, equip with
重视：place emphasis on, attach importance to, highlight, put…as priority
忽视,低估：ignore, neglect, underestimate, place less emphasis on
自律的：self-disciplinary
职业培训：vocational training
理论知识：theoretical knowledge
同伴影响：peer influence
榜样：role models

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雅思写作教育类话题常用观点一：Traditional learning style VS. modern learning style

The importance of teacher

1）information reliability (信息的可靠性)
Qualified teachers can tell students whether the information is authoritative or not.
2）student-oriented pattern（学生为中心的模式）
Teachers know how to help learners figure out a certain problem and how to motivate their learning interests by considering the learning styles of target students.

The advantages of other sources

1）the diversity of information（信息的多样性）
   Learners can learn extensive and updated knowledge in various fields ranging from science to art.
2）learning motivation (学习动机)
   The information shown by vivid picture and videos can interest young learners more.

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雅思写作教育类话题常用观点二：The purpose of schooling

The important of moral education

1）benefit individual development (有利于个人发展)
A student who does not know what rules should be obeyed and what behaviors are illegal but only understands academic knowledge might go astray due to the lack of social awareness.
2）belong to the basic responsibility of teachers（属于老师的责任）
Educators are supposed to help students form positive worldviews and impart knowledge of laws and regulations to students so that they will become well-educated citizens.

The importance of academic knowledge

1）suit the practical needs of students (适合学生的实际需求)
If a student acquires professional knowledge and skills related to a certain fields, he or she will find well-paid or decent jobs.
2）achieve the main objective of schooling (完成教育的主要目标)
The major reason why parents send their children to school is that parents expect them to expand their knowledge range with the help of qualified teachers, and parents can tell their children how to distinguish right from wrong instead.

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雅思写作教育类话题常用观点三：Academic subjects VS. arts and sports

The importance of academic subjects

1）be conductive to job seeking (职业导向)
It is true that people who are equipped with knowledge related to science or finance can easily find jobs with a stable income and high status. However, the same cannot be said for people who study the arts.
2）benefit national development (有利于国家发展)
As for a country, its achievements in scientific research can have considerable rewards not only in elevated status, but also in the advantages that can be gained by applying the knowledge in various fields, such as the military, medicine, and so on.

The importance of arts and sports

1）enrich one’s spiritual life (丰富个人精神生活)
It is fantastic music that can make people forget their troubles. It is an inspirational movie that can give people a glimpse into a world they had never imagined. It is dancing that provides release for the heavy weight we carry.
2）increase one’s sense of national pride (提高国家荣誉)
A country which gains success in the art industry and in sports competitions deserves the respect of others.

以上是王杰老师为大家分享的雅思写作教育类话题高分范文赏析，希望对广大考生有所帮助。

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