雅思工作类大作文典例分析及原创范文

 工作类的大作文中常考的一个角度是“工作稳定性vs.满意度”。据笔者统计，在历年的工作类考题中这个角度相关的题占了将近1/4，去年底甚至出现两场连考的现象，足可见这个角度的高频。因此就很有必要好好准备一下，鉴于目前雅思官方铁了心地反预测和机经，平时的积累就愈加重要。

下面这道典型例题是讨论型的，逻辑上还算比较容易处理，以此为例来思考一下。审题后可以找到一个关键词“more important”，所以这篇的关键是比较job satisfaction & job security的重要性问题。按照四段式展开：

开头段：先适当改写题目，引出话题，然后用一句话简单回应问题，清楚表达自己的立场， “很难说哪个更重要，因为个人需求和情况都可能有很大的差异”；

主体一：讨论工作稳定性的重要性，分三点展开——首先，稳定的工作意味着持续性的收入， 可以确保生活的基本需求得以满足；其次，有稳定工作的人通常能享有更好的退休 金和其它各种福利待遇；最后，稳定工作的人更可能充满信心，由于熟练度提升， 从而相对更舒服，压力也更小；

主体二：讨论工作满意度的重要性，一点式展开——工作满意度与个人的生活质量息息相关， 虽然每个人的基本需求大致一样，但具体到个人的需要或欲望可能天差地别，对于 有些人来说，不管付出多少代价也要追求梦想，对他们来说，仅仅“活着”是不够 的；

结尾段：重申自己的观点，不管是选择稳定工作还是追求工作满意度都应该谨慎，以尽量做 出不会令自己后悔的决定。

以下原创范文供参考： Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others think that people cannot always expect to enjoy a job and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Sample: Job security and satisfaction have always been two key factors for people to consider throughout their lives. As far as I am concerned, it is hard to tell which one is more vital, because personal needs and situation can be of large difference. There is no doubt that the stability of a job means greatly to an average individual. Firstly, a secured occupation can ensure consistent incoming of money necessary for covering all the basic needs of people, such as paying for housing, bills, healthcare, travel and education. Secondly, people holding a permanent job often have better pension and other forms of welfare. The reason is that those benefits can easily be influenced by frequent interruption resulting from an unstable working situation. Finally, people are more likely to feel confident about their work because of an increasing level of proficiency, therefore leading to a relatively comfortable and less stressful career. However, it is not uncommon today that some people sacrifice their happiness in order to maintain a seemingly decent job, which can be rather pathetic. Job satisfaction is closely related to the general quality of life for an individual. After all, while the basic needs are more or less identical, specific demands and desires can vary significantly among different people. For example, in any ages there have always been a certain proportion of people, particularly in the fields of creative industry like painting, dedicated to pursuing their dreamy career path however high the price may be. It seems to them that merely breathing on the ground needless to worry about surviving is insufficient, as quoted from a late rock star 'better burn out than fade away'. In conclusion, before making any decision, either staying in a job permanently or searching for more satisfying one, individuals should really think it over and try to make the right move that they would not regret in the future.

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