雅思写作中，你的标点符号够不够“大胆”？！

我们在阅读中常常发现，通过使用一些特殊符号，可以起到进一步解释说明的作用，从而避免了使用复杂的从句，使整个句子看起来工整、简洁、漂亮。如：

1. What explains this remarkable turn of events? Two factors: people have figured out how to use water more efficiently, and communities are rethinking their priorities for water use. ( 剑7P24G段 )

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2. Tens of millions of people have been forced to move from their homes—often with little warning or compensation—to make way for the reservoirs behind dams. ( 剑7P23 D段 )

3. Fireflies and some fish (usually with the help of bacteria) have the power to manufacture their own light, but the process seems to consume a large amount of energy. ( 剑7P18 C段 )

我们也可以试着在写作中使用这些标点符号，试试看。

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剑7 P102 WritingTask 2

What explains my point of view that it is a university’s top priority to give students good knowledge unrelated to workplace directly? Two factors: people’s mind needs different knowledge to mature and function well, as our body need various nutrients to keep fit, and no one can see clearly what career suits him or her before trying and knowing much enough.

剑7 P79 WritingTask 2

Good match between personality and work content—often seen in those who excel at their positions— accounts for the biggest part of job satisfaction.

剑7 P54 WritingTask 2

We have a good reason to doubt whether the talent of Mozart (a fragile and sensitive musician)can be channeled into another totally different area, like football orpolitics.

这样既可以把句子拉长，又避免了使用从句时易犯的语法错误，请大胆使用。

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