雅思写作9分技巧之表现力的加强

雅思写作词汇运用的不准确常常会造成一些中式英语文章，这样容易让考官对句意理解产生分歧，同学们在复习备考雅思考试的过程中，决不能放松对雅思写作词汇的学习，万丈高楼平地起，只有精确熟练的掌握雅思写作技巧词汇的应用，才可能在雅思考试的道路上跑的更快!以下是雅思写作词汇量扩展的技巧以及运用方法。希望可以帮助到大家。

一、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力，当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。

例如：

1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.

Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.

Better: She compares prices and quality.

二、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。这是语言考试，不是专业考试，提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上，是文章的表现力上!

例如：

1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

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三、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单，生动。

例如：

1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

四、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。

1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语，这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握，但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。

例如：

Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

例如：

1) Weak: The team members are good players.

Revision: The team members play well.

2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

例如：

1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.

Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

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五、尽量运用主动语态。之所以要这样做，是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动，什么时候该用被动。用错了，当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。

例如：

1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.

Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

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