雅思写作五宗罪！

对于雅思写作，很多学生都是凑字数，觉得能完成两篇总共400字的文章就万事大吉了，殊不知有些小的细节忽视掉，分数会受到大大的影响。

一：出现第二人称you或your, 或第一人称we

第二人称代词you和your也不要出现在雅思作文这样的正式文体中，雅思作文的正文中尽量不要出现we这样的第一人称代词，we can say, we must say这样的句型搭配也是很不学术的。

When you go to school, you can always make some friends.

---When a person attends the school, he or she is likely to make some friends.

二：出现缩写

雅思是正式文体，不能出现任何形式的缩写，包括it’s, won’t etc.，e.g.在内。尤其要提醒考生注意不要出现缩写形式can’t，改为cannot。

It’s important for teenagers to follow parents' rules.

---It is crucial for teenagers to follow parents' rules.

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三：个别代表整体

雅思考试中不要举自己或者身边亲朋好友的事例，这会大大削弱你文章的客观性和说服力。

Disobeying parents bring many troubles. Take my cousin for example, he never listen to my aunt's suggestion and play computer games for many hours, his scores are very low.

---For example, if children refuse to obey parents’orders and spend too many hours on playing games, they might have lower scores.

四：词汇口语化

既然是写作，那么肯定不能够太过随意。例如不要出现As we all know，这样的短语过于口语化。

We should invest lots of money in education, so kids would learn more things.

---In order to improve education, a large amount of fund should be invested in this sector.

五：有个人强烈的感情

雅思写作本身就是议论文，需要以论点论据说话，而不是强加个人的感情。

Air travel saves us time. How convenient it is!

- --The advent of air travel strengthens the efficiency. It is indeed a time-saving/ convenient transport.

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