2014年3月15日雅思A类大作文范文解析

2014年3月15日雅思考试A类大作文题目：

Some people think it is important for all the cities and towns to have large outdoor space for public use, such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree?(Word account=297)

2014年3月15日雅思考试A类大作文思路解析及范文：

第一段： 社会背景+正向/反向观点+自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因)

社会背景： 城镇规划的公共场所在某种程度上影响城镇的发展

正向观点：一些人认为—在城镇的广场以及公园的建立具有重要的意义。

自己观点： 我认为这样一种做法有利于 人们身心的健康 以及 城市居住环境的改善

The scheme of cities and towns in public places has influenced urban development to some extent. Some people deem that the establishment of square plazas and public gardens is essential. After serious consideration, I approve that such a practice is conducive to people’s physical and psychological health as well as the improvement of residential environment in urban areas. =58

第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论 【雅思写作咨询】

论点：大型休闲广场的建立——有利于——市民的锻炼身体与放松心情

论据：大型室外场所——有助于市民的身体健康以及进行娱乐休闲活动。

例证： 在城镇的大部分人都承受者来自生活的各个方面的压力，产生焦虑的情绪，这些娱乐场所可以缓解市民的这些压力与焦虑，以保持健康的身体与愉悦的心情。

结论：从这个角度讲，这样的公共场所对市民的健康起到了重要作用。

To begin with, outdoor space provides residents with a public place for physical and mental relaxation. In other words, setting up large-scale plazas contributes to maintaining citizens’ health of body and mind by enabling more entertainment and leisure activities. Since a majority of people in metropolises and towns tend to endure higher pressure, public sites can make it possible for citizens to relieve tension and anxiety and to stay healthy and joyful. From this point, public outdoor places play a significant role in improving residents’ health conditions. =87

第三段： 论点+论据+例证+结论 【雅思最新机经】

论点：公共的休闲的场所— 有助于——改善城市生活环境

论据: 户外公共休闲娱乐场所——意味着——为市民提供更适合宜居的生活环境。

例证： 很多大型的公园以及广场使得城镇更加具有人文气息,在很大程度上改善了城市的面貌，增加了城市的,从而提升了对于城市生活质量

结论：因此，室外公共场所的建立符合城市化的需求。

Furthermore, communal and leisure places can conduce to improving urban living surroundings. Conspicuously, establishing such sites means furnishing citizens with more favorable living surroundings. For example, good-sized parks and squares endowed conurbations and towns with a humanistic flavor, making metropolises better places to live in and enhancing residents’ quality of life at the same time. From this point, the availability of public places is an integral element in urban development. =70

第四段：让步段 另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳 【雅思培训咨询】

另一种观点合理性：

大型的户外工厂与公园的设计尤其不合理的因素，例如减少日益紧张的居民住宅面积，(结果)影响城市居民生活质量以及降低人们对城市生活的满意度。

(对此反驳)：

合理的公园以及广场的规划是城市化发展的必然

原因：

1 居民生活质量与生活环境的实际需求

2 城镇的自身的发展。

Admittedly, good-sided communal sites also have a negative impact on urban development, such as to scale down the residential area which can affect living quality and residents’ happiness to some extent. However, a reasonable scheme including parks and squares in urban design is an inevitable trend, in view of citizens’ higher living requirements as well as the development of metropolises and towns themselves. =63

第五段：总结观点+提出建议

总结观点：市民的身体健康 +城市生活环境的改善——体现了——在城镇建立公共休闲场所的合理性。

In brief, citizens’ relaxation requirements and improvement of urban surroundings present the preponderance of setting up public leisure places. =19

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