托福写作之用词和句型

语言的variety, 即用词的变化，用句的变化，就语言而论不存在哪个词好，哪个词不好，哪个句子结构好，哪句子结构不好的说法。所谓语言漂亮是指语言的变化。

1．词的变化

一想到“使”就是make ；一要表达“不仅，而且”的意思就用not only... but aslo；一要说“人们认为”就是people think ；甚至出现 More and more people who become more and more rich can buy more and more TV这样的句子。

如要表示“使”，不要仅依靠make:

a) This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights.

b) Women are still denied equal rights.

a) The incident made me recall one of my past experiences.

b) The incident reminded me of one of my past experiences.

如要表达“越来越”，不要只使用more and more:

a) More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult.

b) Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly difficult.

a) More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.

b) Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.

a) More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy.

b) There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.

如要表达“大多数”，不要一味用most:

a) Most students take a part-time job after class.

b) The vast majority of students take a part-time job after class

a) Most people take part in sports of different kinds.

b) The considerable proportion of people take part in sports of different kinds.

a) Most college students take a negative attitude towards smoking.

b) The large percentage of college population take a negative attitude towards smoking.

如要表达“不仅……，而且……”不要只用not only... but also:

a) The factors for a rise in teenage smoking is not only social but also psychological.

b) The factors for a rise in teenage smoking is psychological as well as social.

a) Taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact with society.

b) Taking a part-time job means more than a little money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact with society.