SAT写作之论述部分

6月将至，又是SAT考试的高峰季，香港的考点已经全满，很多考生要转投到其他考点，如韩国、日本。面临日益激烈的SAT考试，写作何去何从呢？我们还需要牢记PIE的突兀结构以谋求一个8分的起评分吗？答案是否定的。

自教SAT以来，很多时候都是按照SAT写作的TEE（Topic-Explanation-Example）来教导学生，发现如果学生的分数总维持在8~9分的基本分数。语言当然是重要的一个环节，但是否能决定一个学生的最终分数呢？

问题在于例子和论述间没有很好的联系起来，导致body段很突兀。例如：

Classical ballet prevailed in 19th century known for its highly strict rules and unnatural body movements. Isodora Duncan, the founder of modern dance, innovated a unique style"Free Dance". Her goal is to alternate the way performers dance and try to convey true emotion to audience. Although her view on dance was strongly against Russian authorities, she never gave up her faith in modern dance. Later on, this new style of dancing won popularity among the public. Many dance learners go for instruction and many famous dancers appeared. || From the story of Duncan, we realize that successful people never let prevailing opinions hinder their mind. Instead, they just keep moving towards their belief no matter what.

这个body的问题是没有进行很好的论述，很匆忙地结束了自己的段落。应该首先将自己的叙述部分更加简洁化，然后更多的时间放在夹叙夹议中，如下文：

Columbus serves as one prominent example in casting aside the then authorities and scholars. During the Renaissance, many navigators motivated and tempted by outside world struggled in sailing in the ocean to seek for their fortune at the other end of world. Columbus was of no exception. He led his ships and sailors sailing across the Atlantic Ocean and settling in the new world. （层一）Truth proves that his belief that the new world is India failed by another voyage of Magellan. However, his founding introduced another unknown continent which changes the whole wide world completely and radically. More than often, we young generation can come up with new thoughts owing to the fact we have underwent better education and life experience. We have the right to give voice to what we believe is right. It is inevitable that this road does not go as we expected in that this demands more commitment and sacrifice.（层二） Besides, what our predecessors or authorities achieved did go through up and down. Thus, they are deserved the respect we are supposed to bestow. But the only thing we need to struggle for and never regret is finding the truth no matter what it ends.（层三）

第二层是重点：首先说出了事件的结果是失败的，然后他的新发现并没有白费，而是带来了一个全新的版块——美洲大陆。后面直接联系到我们年轻人，目的是让考官知道自己没有跑题，而且紧跟高中生所关注的事情。不要轻易被权威所打倒，要说出自己的心声。

第三层是延伸：用一个类似于让步的形式，表示自己观点的客观性，我们的先辈经历了很多，付出了很多，理应值得尊重，也就是当下特别时髦的向某人致敬，那么最后再次回到我们的立场，要质疑和具有创新精神。

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