来自雅思前考官的备考秘籍：“一般到特殊”的例子

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2021-01-18 来源：互联网作者：阅读量： 60 手机阅读

导读

来自英国的Simon是雅思考试的前考官。他创办的ielts-simon.com网站有许多雅思备考不可多得宝贵资料。每天他都会在网站上更新一个简短的小课程，我们将其搬运过来并翻译成中文，供大家学习参考。

来自英国的Simon是雅思考试的前考官。他创办的ielts-simon网站有许多雅思备考不可多得宝贵资料。每天他都会在网站上更新一个简短的小课程，我们将其搬运过来并翻译成中文，供大家学习参考。

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IELTS Advice: an example of 'general to specific'

雅思建议：“一般到特殊”的例子

Look at the two short paragraphs below. Can you see the difference between them?

请看下面两段短文，你能看出它们之间的区别吗？

Paragraph 1

Every member of society should contribute to improving the environment. We all need to take responsibility for the environmental issues that face the planet. If each individual person plays his or her part, our world will remain habitable for future generations.

第1段：

每一个社会成员都应该为改善环境做出贡献，我们要对地球面临的环境问题负责。如果每个人都发挥自己的作用，我们的世界将继续适合后代居住。

Paragraph 2

Every member of society should contribute to improving the environment. Small daily actions, like turning lights off or recycling paper, glass and plastics, can make a difference. I also try to play my part by walking or by taking public transport rather than driving.

第2段：

每一个社会成员都应该为改善环境做出贡献。一些日常小动作，比如关灯或回收纸、玻璃和塑料，都可以起到作用。而我也会通过步行或乘坐公共交通工具代替开车来贡献我的力量。

Analysis

Paragraph 1 might look good in terms of the vocabulary that I used, but it doesn't really move forward. The three sentences basically say the same thing in different ways. It's all too general.

就我使用的词汇而言，第1段可能看起来不错，但它并没有真正地深入讨论。这三个句子基本上在用不同的方式说同一件事，太过于笼统了。

Paragraph 2 might seem simpler, but it's much better in terms of 'task response' and 'coherence' because the main idea is extended and we can see some progression. Can you see the movement from general to specific in this paragraph?

第2段用词似乎更简单，但就“任务响应”和“连贯性”而言，它却要好很多。因为中心思想被扩展了，我们可以看到一些深入探讨。你能在这一段看到从一般到具体的过程吗？