本期新通教育西安雅思写作老师舒琴为同学们讲解雅思写作TR,希望老师的讲解能够帮助到大家。
很多同学在雅思写作中总是会卡到5.5左右,然后复习的时候核心都放在积累表达和句式结构上,极少有人会把重心放在TR上,尤其是审题过程非常粗糙。之前我们已经讲过了考官的打分模式,也特别强调了要注意TR,今天我们再深入探讨一下怎样的TR才能上7分。
文章重心是很多学生都有的问题,一般情况下如果文章有重心偏移TR就不会过7,我们用例子来说明一下。
题目:Lecturers are used to teach a large number of students. Some people believe that with the technologies available now for education, lecturers are no needed anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这道主要的重心是想问technology nowadays 是否会替代lecturer.
以下是学生的段落:There is no denying that lecture has proven itself to be quite useful in improving students’ learning efficiency. Such efficiency is mainly achieved due to the most time-saving way of the transmitting of knowledge, which is prepared elaborately by teachers. Normally in most cases, it will take quite a long time for students to digest new and elusive contents fully which they are not familiar with. However, in the form of presenting refined contents directly to students, much time can be saved. Thus, students’ efficiency of acquiring knowledge is facilitated.
这篇文章的重心是在说lecture这样的教学模式是很高级的,有谈论到lecture, 但是没有讲到technology nowadays是否能强大到让lecture失业。
这是很多学生的问题,只能把X(lecture)和Y(lecture讲课模式的好处efficiency)之中的关系连接起来,多加上一个Z(technology nowadays)就说不清楚了。这就是为何如果学生直接进入讲述影响模式但不考虑命题到底在问什么,TR的天花板(在语言论述特别好的情况下)就是7。
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