托福独立写作范文分析

以下是本期的托福独立写作范文解析，希望老师的分析思路能给同学们带来帮助。

Parents give their children weekly money to buy whatever they want. Some people think this can cause bad habits and ideas about money in children.

In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分论点1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore, they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example, I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.

In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分论点2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.

In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.

1：范文的中心论点是?

中心论点： I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

2：范文的分论点是?

分论点1：Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives.

分论点2：In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.

3：作者在文章中用到了哪些论证方法?

In this day and age, parents in China tend to spend almost all their savings on children, hoping that they can outcompete peers by obtaining more outstanding skills, let alone weekly money. However, some experts worry that children will spoiled by parents and lose the ability to their living. As far as I am concerned, I contend that parents can give their children limited weekly money, which can not only cultivate their habits of money management but also relieve their burden.

Initially, weekly money from parents enables children to concentrate on academic development without worrying how to sustain their daily lives(分论点1). As we can see, schools in China put increasingly emphasize on study, so students are always bombard with a large amount of tasks such as assignments, presentations and exams. Therefore(因果论证), they have no time for extracurricular activities or even entertainments. Without weekly money, they will lead a considerably miserable life, striving to find a balance between preparing school works and doing part-time jobs. Take myself as example(举例论证), I chose 12 courses last semester, joined an internship program and participated in 3 mathematics competitions. Since I have been longing for being accepted by the postgraduate program of my dream school, I got mountains of things to deal with. Had it not been my parents’ support, I would not have been fight my way out during these though days.

In addition, someone may assert that weekly money causes bad habits and ideas about money in children, stating that children will take the money for granted and spend it without restriction.(分论点2) Also, they suggest that forcing children to do part-time jobs helps to enhance their abilities of living by themselves and relieve parents’ burden. However, plausible as it sounds, the idea dos not hold water. Parents can grab opportunities to teach their children how to manage their money efficiently. What’s more*举例论证, they can share opinions on how to allocate asset among several financial markets such as stock market, bond market and monetary market. On the one hand, after raising children’s consciousness of money management, they are less likely to spend money at will but calculate precisely before buying their favorable things. Meanwhile, children can apply for student loans instead of wasting precious time on repetitive and simple tasks, since(因果论证) they cannot afford to pay the price for falling behind others academically.

In conclusion, considering all the factors above, I firmly insist that parents offer weekly money to children. Only in this way can children get to know practical skills of money management and ensure their academic performance.

本期托福独立写作范文分析就到这里。托福写作当中，最重要的就是要写！如果不动笔，只在眼里过一下的话，是写不好作文的，羲族当还在你哥hi与都按各种问题，同学们要多加练习。如果同学们考虑通过课程来提升自己的话，新通教育是非常不错的选择哦。