托福学术写作的高分秘籍，还不快快马住

托福写作并不等于我们在学校中所接触到的英语作文，在ETS考官的眼中，托福ESSAY是学术基础，是能够体现学生将来在大学与研究生学习中论文等学术写作能力的一个基础测试。 所以大家一定要注意不要陶醉于华而不实的长句子，或者写意的表述。

1.DO:Pay attention to the audience；

　考虑到你的读者

在写托福写作以及北美学术写作之前，请认真思考，谁是你的读者群，如果是托福写作则很显然，除了机改还有两个交叉打分的考官。那么你就得考虑你的用语，内容是否是你的读者能接受的，比如，如果你在文章中举中国古代历史上的的例子，“床前明月光……”那考官有可能是完全不懂的，这种情况下要怎么拿高分呢？

2. DO: Levels of formality；

语言正式

The level of formality you write with should be determined by the expectations of your audience and your purpose. For example, if you are writing a cover letter for a job application or a college academic essay, you would write in a formal style. If you are writing a letter to a friend, writing something personal, or even writing something for a humorous or special interest magazine when informal writing is expected, you would use a more informal style. Formality exists on a scale—in the example below, a letter of application to a known colleague can result in a semi- formal style.

在托福写作中正式的学术语言非常重要，梦幻的句子并不是关键，言之有物，简洁用词精确其实更能拿高分。

　　举例Here is an example:

Formal正式 (Written to an unknown audience): I am applying for the receptionist position advertised in the local paper. I am an excellent candidate for the job because of my significant secretarial experience, good language skills, and sense of organization.

举例 Here is an example:

Formal正式 (Written to an unknown audience): I am applying for the receptionist position advertised in the local paper. I am an excellent candidate for the job because of my significant secretarial experience, good language skills, and sense of organization.

Semi-formal 半正式 (Written to a well-known individual): I am applying for the receptionist position that is currently open in the company. As you are aware, I have worked as a temporary employee with your company in this position before. As such, I not only have experience and knowledge of this position, but also already understand the company's needs and requirements for this job.

Formal正式 (Written to an unknown audience): I am applying for the receptionist position advertised in the local paper. I am an excellent candidate for the job because of my significant secretarial experience, good language skills, and sense of organization.

Semi-formal 半正式 (Written to a well-known individual): I am applying for the receptionist position that is currently open in the company. As you are aware, I have worked as a temporary employee with your company in this position before. As such, I not only have experience and knowledge of this position, but also already understand the company's needs and requirements for this job.

Informal (Incorrect)不正式: Hi! I read in the paper that ya'llwere looking for a receptionist. I think that I am good for that job because I've done stuff like it in the past, am good with words, and am incredibly well organized.

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