托福综合写作的毛病一次性给你治好

 托福综合写作中有不少同学容易犯以下常见错误，今天小编就给大家来治治病~

01

病症1：可以照抄综合写作的阅读部分

治疗：

要改写，并且起码做到：

①句式

②语序

这两点之一要替换掉，这才叫改写呀!

02

病症2： 综写评分点都在听力部分，阅读主干提炼的一般般也没啥大事

治疗：

首先，听力>阅读。

但是：

①阅读写错了是要扣分的;

②阅读如果写不清的话，后面你也无法阐述清是阅读部分是如何对应到听力里被否定、被反驳的，这样的话是拿不到大good的。

03

病症3：综合写作词数不够没啥事

治疗：

150-225，都是按照官方标准(但写少了会扣分哟)。

通常，210左右是大多数同学在规定时间内能够完成的，并且能把作文写清楚的数字。

另外托福综合写作高分取决于

1.对听力内容的还原程度;

2.语言表达的优劣，包括：句式多样性、语言运用的准确程度、词组的运用能力以及语义表达的的逻辑性

你的薄弱环节在哪里呢?快快操练起来吧~

附上托福综合写作各段落常用句式：

开头段

The lecture apparently disproves what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage … However the professor asserts that a closer scrutiny of this argument would reveal how flimsy it is. He then presents several evidences to demonstrate his statement.

内容第一段

To start with, the professor claims that the reading passage fails to take into account that…

Therefore, the assertion of the author seems too absolute since other possibilities could not be eliminated by any current evidence.

内容第二段

Furthermore, the passage assumes that…. The professor, however, suggests that this assumption may not be merited by the evidence. Say, ….. The contradiction is obvious here when … . On the basis of this point the lecture explicitly refutes the passage.

内容第三段

Last but not the least, the passage may be right about …., but one critical fact is being left out of consideration. Pointed out by the professor, the author totally neglects the truth that… On account of above-mentioned grave mistakes, the author’s assertion turned out to be a preposterous idea.

结尾段

In conclusion, based on the arguments offered above, the professor clearly identifies the defects in the reading passage and forcefully shows that…

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