托福写作之文章结构学习(上)

 所以本篇文章，西安新通教育托福写作老师胡一美为大家讲解的是文章结构学习，这部分有所欠缺的同学，可以跟着老师的思路，自习学习，相信这篇文章能给大家带来一定的帮助。

写作中，文章结构的把控对于整体的得分来讲哈市非常有影响的。如何更好的分配文章结构是一件非常关键的任务。

通过分类举例方法，我们的文章结构有2种可能：

(1) 一边倒： 所列举的3种情况都支撑一边。 总观点就是totally agree/disagree

(2) 中立：所列举的2/3种情况 支撑不同的边。 总观点就是：depends on xx (分类的标准，比如：age group; jobs ... )

因为“一边倒”总观点需要我们所列举的3种情况能够包含所有的情况，所以比较难。

所以推荐大家有意识地选择 中立总观点。

范文一：一边倒总观点的文章结构.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People should not pay for the public transportation.

人们不应该为公共交通系统付费。

In this day and age, passengers are charged for their riding. Since most of the mass transportation facilities[交通设备] are partially owned by the private businesses, the system generally aims at the maximization of profits. I strongly believe that people should pay for the public transportation, including city buses, highways and trains, for the following reasons.

[虽然作者举例了三种情况，但是因为三种情况都 支持要付费，所以总观点还是要支持 付费。总观点是绝对的总观点。

并且bus; highways; trains 三者基本上都涵盖了公共交通的所有方式。所以一边倒也可以]

Firstly, people should pay for the city buses for better service quality. For one thing, the profits can act as a driven force for the bus companies to improve their service. They tend to increase the number of buses, optimize[优化] the driving courses and do well in maintaining the bus to attract more passengers and boost the profits. For another, profits will surely intensify the competition(激发竞争)between bus companies, which will finally lead to the entire improvement of the bus service system.

Secondly, people should pay for the highway system since the government built the highways as investments. If people stop paying, government may stop building more highways and it will result in the inconvenience and low efficiency of traffic system. For example, the citizens in my hometown have ever been reluctant to(不乐意) pay for the highway. What is more, some illegal long-distance transportation firms which used the highway frequently do not pay for the fees and beat the cashiers in the highway very seriously. Several months later, the government had to close the highway because they failed in investments. This phenomenon negatively influenced upon and set back the development of the local economy.

Finally, people should pay for the trains. There are different classes of train tickets such as hard-seat tickets, sleeper tickets and non-seat tickets. If passengers take it without paying, it will be difficult to reach an agreement among the passengers on the fair distribution(分配) of tickets and seats. The more you pay for, the better seat you should keep. Furthermore, it will be a heavy burden for the government to support the train system independently.

To sum up, I insist that we should pay for public transportation. It is the right for everyone to benefit from the mass transportation, and it is also everyone’s responsibility to support it.

最后的总结也要再强调一下自己的观点。对于自己的作文把控，结尾是非常重要的。

好用的词或者短语

optimize[优化] the driving courses

intensify the competition(激发竞争)

driven force 驱动力

boost the profits 促进利益

a heavy burden for ....沉重的负担

hard-seat tickets, sleeper tickets and non-seat tickets：硬座票 卧铺票 站票

本期雅思写作文章结构就先讲解到这里，在文章当中，老师还为大家拓展了一些用词，希望同学们能将这些词牢记并应用到自己的考试当中。本篇是托福写作文章结构老师给大家分析并做了示例，希望能给同学么能带来帮助。当然，新通教育西安还为大家提供多种班型的，帮助同学们提升成绩。

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