托福考试的独立写作中，你的语言表达为何总是Fair?

托福考试的独立写作中，很多中国考生总是卡在fair的等级无法达到good，这是什么原因导致的呢？排除了跑题和偏题的情况，在保证语法错误在可控范围内的条件下我们来探讨如何在语言上帮助学生突破万年的fair。

首先，我们看看等级为fair的独立写作主体段：

To learn at universities is helpful for students to find a good job in the future. This is because there are a large number of excellent professors and teachers at universities. Students can learn a wide range of knowledge and master different practical skills. In this case, students are able to enhance and develop their potential through courses offered by universities. Therefore, students can find an ideal occupation in the future. For example, ...

其次，我们对比看看等级为good的独立写作主体段：

To learn at universities sets a solid foundation for students’ future career. This is because there are a large number of excellent professors and teachers at universities so that students can learn a wide range of knowledge and master different practical skills. In this case, students are able to enhance and develop their potential through courses offered by universities, which ensures an ideal occupation in the future. For example, ...

对比两个主体段的例段，我们不难发现评分为good的段落相比前面fair等级的段落在句式多样性上下了苦功夫，首先so that的运用巧妙地把前后两个互为因果的句子很好的衔接起来。其次，最后一句定语从句的运用也是很好体现了学生的从句正确运用的能力。