很多学生在雅思写作中逻辑性特别的弱,认为在写作的时候只要注意一些连接词的使用如firstly,moreover或者关系词如because, thus,therefore, although等的运用,但是事实上,我们还需更加注意句与句之间内部的逻辑关系,关键在内容。
很多学生对于雅思写作评分要求中逻辑性这一项上没有清楚的认识,认为在写作的时候只要注意一些连接词的使用如firstly,moreover或者关系词如because, thus,therefore, although等的运用,但是事实上,我们还需更加注意句与句之间内部的逻辑关系,关键在内容。有很多学生也在纠结内部到底应该怎样才叫具有逻辑性,一般我们在写议论文遵循的标准是:start with an idea, explain it in detail and give an example or two, 所以文章要注重from general to specific,一步步的从宽泛到具体,才是句与句之间逻辑性的最重要的要求。例如我们来看一下例文,针对于论证电脑对学习的坏处,即会使得我们的注意力不集中:First of all, one property of modern technology is harmful to any learning mind – it distracts. 中心句写完之后,下一句话就可以开始解释:电脑虽然先进,但是会提供一些不相干的链接,One thing we feel about when we are searching for information online is that the internet, as an outstanding example of modern technology and even regarded as the innovator of education, provides us with not only relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click.接下来可以举例,去图书馆用电脑查资料最后会不自觉地点击蹦出来的链接,最后忘了正事而去看视频或者新闻, More than once I turned on my computer to check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology plays a negative role in learning information.
当然在写作时,除了注重关系词的使用,我们还可以采取·Use this or these to refer to the idea in the previous sentence;Use pronouns like it and they to refer to nouns you have already used 即代词或名词指代,另外也可以Repeat a key word throughout the paragraph;Repeat a key idea in different ways 重复关键词或关键思想去体现句与句之间的关系,这样做也可以使我们的作文论证思路更清楚。
我们看一个例题,
Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society?针对于这个题目的第一个问题,完美的社会应该具备什么样的因素,我们可以采取上面所提到的的重复关键词来解释,体现句与句之间的逻辑性。If I had to choose the one, most desirable element of an ideal society, it would have to be safety. A safe society would be one in which crime did not exist, and in which all citizens trusted their neighbours, felt part of a community, and were even able to leave their doors unlocked without fear. A broader definition of safety could also include belief in state institutions, such as governments or police forces, and confidence that we are all protected by fair laws. In this sense, safety could be described as the most basic and the starting point for the creation of a perfect society. 范文中每句话都重复了关键词safe或者safety, 虽然没有用到一些表示原因结果或者转折的关联词,但是整个段落逻辑性也特别强,所以重复也是一种很好的逻辑论证的方式。
逻辑论证有很多方式,但是大家在写作文时还是不能流于形式,而更应注重自己的论证内容。
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