雅思写作：段落延伸性技巧

很多学生在写作时总抱怨考分低，很大的原因是因为学生在写作时没有进行足够的段落延伸而只是简单的罗列论点。现在的雅思写作考试的评分趋势是更加的注重分论点的展开延伸论证，而很多学生达不到这样的要求或者忽视了这样的要求。在审题清楚，头脑风暴后还需注意对于想出的分论点怎么进行解释以及举例等，达到from general to specific的要求。

下面我们来看一个例题来进行具体的分析：

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 这个题目是一个讨论型的题型，对于两个观点都要进行讨论说明。首先看第一个观点Some people think that strict punishments for driving offenses are the key to reducing traffic accidents. 我们的分论点可以很容易的想到这样做的好处是能够让人们安全驾驶，起到一种威慑的用。Strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. 对于这个分论点不能点到为止，需要再进行延伸，举例说明这些惩罚包括什么比如罚款驾照吊销等等，更具体的解释比如这些使他们意识到自己的行为有严重的后果，会更加自律和警惕。所以我们可以这样往后延伸：There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow the rules more carefully.

而第二个观点Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. 延伸会稍微简单一些，要说明具体的其他的方式，那么延伸的时候就需要从不同的角度去提出多样的解决办法，可以从个人方面或者政府的角度来说明，但是也不能点到为止，比如从道路提升的角度，more attention could be paid to safe road design.后面必须继续加上进一步的解释或者举，For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly.

如果没有充分的延伸扩展，整个文章就会非常的干瘪;其次议论文是要有论证和论据的，如果只是简简单单的罗列分论点，也不符合议论文的写作要求。很多学生会觉得这样的细节延伸很难，其实延伸都是对事实情况的进一步说明，足够的常识并且在练习以及考试的时候开动脑筋就不是一件难事。只有进行了充分延伸的文章才是比较丰满有说服力的自然离高分也不远。

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