雅思写作真题范文：line graph&教育类

雅思写作小作文——Writing Task I
　　由于每个月的四次考试中总会涉及到line graph，今天我们就来讲一讲line graph题怎么写， Line graph是典型的动态图，需要掌握以下词汇：
　　上升：go up  increase  rise  grow 下降：decline  decrease   drop  fall
　　波动：fluctuate  平稳remain stable (steady ) at
　　经历某种变化：see experience witness(例：see an upward trend/experience a sharp increase)
　　达到最高点：peak at/reach its highest level at   落到最低点：fall to its lowest point /level at
　　急剧：Sharp  rapid   dramatic  steep  显著大幅：Noticeable  significant  Considerable  substantial
　　小幅：slight  持续：gradual  continuous   consistent

请掌握例文中的10个句型
　　例：The graph below shows the number of people at a London underground station from 6:00 to 22:00. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1. It is clear from the line graph that the number of people using this station fluctuates significantly over the 16 hours.第一句话请注意一定要把主语交代清楚，不能只说the number of….
　　2. At 6am the number of people in the station stands at 100. 起点用stand at表示位于
　　3. Then the figure rises dramatically over the next 2 hours, peaking at 400. 动态图请注意用then等连接手段
　　4. After that, the figure drops rapidly, reaching 180 at 10 am. 请注意用After that这个连接手段
　　5. The period between 10 o’clock and 12 o’clock experiences a slight rise in the number of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. 主语不仅可以用数值，也可用一段时间

6. The figure remains stable at just under 300 people over the following 2 hours. Following可改成 next
　　7. After that, the number of people in the station plunges to its lowest point of 90 by 4pm. 急剧跌落
　　8. The next 2 hours sees a sharp rise, with the number of people reaching 380 at 6am.
　　9. After 6 pm, the figure falls again.
　　10. the period from 8 pm to 10 pm experiences a slight rise, but finally the number of people in the station declines again, ending at 135 at 10pm. 结尾点一定要写

注意line graph当中的main features：起点、终点、最高点、最低点。线图的分段按照线的种类来分：几条线或者几种线就分几段。

雅思写作大作文——Writing Task II
　　10-12月两月中出现频率最高的话题还是教育类，因此重点还是要放在教育类，因为哪怕考题是犯罪类的最终也能回归到教育类，所以给出一篇融合教育科技工作生活类的文章供同学们参考。

Advantage & disadvantage 范文
　　With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
　　The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to study and work from home. When we enjoy the convenience and flexibility of this new pattern, its negative influence should also be noted. 第一句话是对题干所要讨论现象的改写，第二句话指出这个现象既有优势也劣势。

Working from home enables employees to have a flexible schedule. As long as they can meet the deadline, they can choose any time in a day to do their work. In distance learning, the course content can be recorded and replayed, which means students can review it as many times as they want. The most attractive part is that employees and students do not need to travel to the company and the school every day, which saves them a great deal of time and energy. 主体段第一段写优势，分别从三个角度切入：一。上班族获得的益处；二。学生获得的益处；三。递进：上班族和学生共同获得的益处。

However, this work pattern probably only suits some jobs that can be done on computer such as designing, accounting, translation, etc. Due to the lack of face to face communication, colleagues are likely to become alienated, which may affect their cooperation. Another problem is the relaxing environment at home. Without discipline and supervision, some employees may find it difficult to finish their tasks on time. In addition to this, the biggest concern is perhaps for students, whose education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only. When staying in school, students will learn how to interact with their peers, how to respect their teachers, how to obey school rules, etc. These elements are an indispensable part of education, but they will be missing in distance learning. 主体段第二段写劣势，前两个分论点写上班族；后一个深入写了学生群体。

To sum up, learning and working via the Internet is a convenient way sand it is expected to become more popular in the future. However, we should take other factors into consideration when we decide to work or study from home. From my point of view, the disadvantages of working or studying online outweigh its advantages.前两句话采用以退为进的方式，先承认这个趋势的优势，转折之后说出作者的顾虑。最后一句话水到渠成得出结论回应考官的提问： the disadvantages (drawbacks)of this outweigh its advantages(benefits).

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