11月21日雅思写作真题及范文

A卷小作文：1962-2002 5个不同国家占澳大利亚移民比重变化

A卷大作文：社会家庭类，why+how 一些社会中父母角色不同的原因及未来发展趋势

B卷小作文：柱图，5个国家的health spending GDP

B卷大作文：教育类， to what extent A/D 过于强调学术表现，要增加vocational education培养实用型人才

从这次的题型和问题来看，大家反映写作部分比前几日的加试要难。小作文加试出现了非图表类，这次两套题都是图表类了。两套大作文题目在09-10年的旧题中可以找到相似的问题，今天在这里分享一些A卷大作文的写作词汇：

Fulfill one’s responsibility 承担义务

Contribute to 造成，影响

Face to face 面对面

Spoil a child 溺爱孩子

Well-behaved 表现良好

Parenthood 家教

Breadwinner 养家糊口

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一篇修改后的学生范文：

People always say that men and women act differently in many aspects. In some countries, they have quite distinct roles to play in parenthood.

One of the possible reasons for this consequence may lie in their male-dominated society. In some part of the world, some stereotyped considerations such as ‘men should be the breadwinner in a family’ ‘ the virtue of women is staying at home, doing cleaning work and take care of her family ’ have been in existence for centuries. This difference leads to childrens’ different decision-making plans. More young men may choose to pursue their dreams of becoming professionals and experts, while more young women may prefer hiding their talent, devoting themselves to some unavoidable chores.

In addition, varied education background and living environment can lead to diversified parents’ personalities, which can also contribute to their offspring’s behaviours. Mothers are more likely to be tender and soft; they would avoid punishment as much as they can, so it is quite possible that a kid is spoiled with only a mother like this. However, fathers’ high expectations and relatively strict requirements on their children may correct the young’s misbehaviours. As a result, the combination can become a good balance in families so that children can be well-behaved.

As far as I am concerned, this gap between men and women will be less in the future for there is an increasingly number of people who are fighting for women’s right of receiving better education, getting fairly paid and so on. It is also notable to see that more males are being active at home, nursing children and spending more time communicating with them face-to-face. 

To conclude, men and women should fulfill their responsibilities in a family and share more duties together to create a better living atmosphere to all. 

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