雅思社会类大作文真题解析及原创范文

 以下是今年考过的一篇社会类大作文，讲的是“要不要像禁烟那样在一些场合禁止手机的使用”。虽然是个新题，但同样套路或类似题材的考题不胜枚举，只要有认真准备过历年真题的，绝对不会对这题目感到吃惊。

我们注意到题干部分由两句话组成：第一句的关键部分是as antisocial as，稍加思考就可得知这句是“主观观点”而非“客观事实”；第二句以so为界线其实又可以分成两部分，前半句是客观事实，而后半句则是主观观点。所以，在回答agree/disagree时，题干中所有主观观点的部分都应该针对性地进行support/undermine。

按四段式的结构展开：开头引出话题+简单回应问题；

中间两段都是主体部分，分别找到两个切入点并拓展；

结尾与开头呼应，重申自己的观点。

中文提纲如下： 总观点：使用手机和吸烟虽有本质不同，但同意在一些场合限制手机的使用。 主体段一：讨论使用手机和吸烟的不同之处，以及为什么无法像禁烟那样禁手机的使用。 主体段二：讨论为什么支持在有些公共场所还是应该禁止使用手机的原因。 结尾段：重申像禁烟那样禁手机是不现实的，但还是希望有些地方能有更严格些的规范。

原创范文供参考： The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile should be banned like smoking. Do you agree or disagree? It is argued that mobile phone users should be treated just the same way as smokers due to the disruptive effects they can cause. I think there is a fundamental difference between using a cell phone and smoking, but I do agree to restrict the use of cells in some occasions. Banning mobile phone usage would surely not be accepted as easily as it is for smoking. Those who never smoke are almost certain to find the smell intolerable. Some may even choke or have other manifestation of discomfort. In the cases where children are involved, the nearby smoker is particularly irritating for the obvious damage caused. By contrast, using a cell phone itself is not that offensive. It is usually the inappropriate ways people use their phones that disturb the others. As long as the users can lower their voice and finish the conversation within just several minutes, they are unlikely to interfere with those around in most places. Also, it is impossible to prevent people from using their mobiles in any places where smoking is banned, supposing an emergency just occurs and there is nowhere else on a bus, for example, to answer the phone. However, I believe there is a necessity to ban the use of mobile phone in certain public places, such as museum, cinema and lecture hall. In those occasions, people are either appreciating or studying something, a preoccupied state which is most susceptible to the influence from any noises. They would find it extremely hard to get immersed back into the same mood or atmosphere once distracted by the annoying voice of a nearby phone user. In fact, the latter one can avoid the disruption he or she brings by simply walking into a restroom or out of the building before making the call. That is why a phone talker in cinema never fails to offend the true moviegoers severely. In conclusion, while it is unrealistic to ban the cell phone usage exactly like smoking, I tend to support a relatively stricter regulation in some specific places where people should not be allowed to use their phones.

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