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【教师原创】2015年3月14日托福写作考情解析

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2015年3月14日的托福考试已经结束,宁波新通外语的石珍娇老师为大家独家分析了该次考试的写作考情,并撰写了原创范文,希望对各位备考托福的考生有所助益!

 综合写作:

 药品广告到底好不好。

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文章认为药品广告不好,因为广告不客观,列举了medication television advertisements的三个缺陷

1advertisements不能公正表现药品的作用,容易导致misuse

2、广告播出后的药物售卖most dramatic

3、政府不能有效控制。

听力反驳:

1Consumers have their own ideas,顾客可以自己do research

2、药物售卖does not mean misuse,因为大家之前不知道这个产品现在知道了。还举了个戒烟的例子

3、政府可以采取措施such as punishment. Companies have a reason to follow the rules

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Many people spend too much money on pets even though there are better uses of money. Do you agree or disagree this opinion?

 

It is true that pet ownership in the modern society has increased significantly. And people who are obsessed with their pets tend to splurge on these furry companions. But this is not without criticism. From my point of view, there is no absolute correct view on consuming, and every single individual has right to decide how much they spend on their pets.

 

First of all, people consume a lot on their pets due to the fact that they treat these animals as their family members. Thanks to the progress of science technology, people are able to communicate with family, friends, colleagues and others regardless of time and geographical limitations, but their relations are also isolated. So they choose pets as their companion in their life. For old folk and some families, such as those without children, pets can improve their well-being, which makes their high consumption on these cute creatures reasonable and understandable. 

 

In the second place, high expenditure on pets can be attributed to the high consumption level of pet industry, which includes pet grooming, pet boarding, pet food and so on. Although different people establish different living standards for their pets, these animals’ basic needs on food, healthcare, housing require large sums of money.

 

On the other hand, some critics have expressed their concern about lavish spending on pets, since they believe that there are far more noble things to spend money, such as helping people who are homeless. However, there is nothing inherently better about using one's resources for charitable purposes than for keeping pets.

 In conclusion, I am convinced that it is proper for people to spend a large amount of money on their pets, because these animals play essential roles in their lives. And it is personal choice to spend their money.原创例文by石珍娇老师

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