托福写作：那些绝对不能出现的开头问题

之前介绍过托福写作如何写好开头，其实相对的是托福考试写作中大家的开头经常有各种问题，而且有一些是非常要命的，下面列举的就是托福考试写作中那些绝对不能出现的开头问题，希望大家能重视。

托福写作开头过分简单没有重点

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

托福考试写作开头用词不当 表达不准

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

托福考试写作意思重复原地踏步

典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

中国俗语胡乱翻译

典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

观点武断 态度强硬

典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

托福考试写作对于大家来说都是比较重要的，而一个好的托福考试写作开头能为自己赚取不少分数，希望大家以后练托福写作时就能多注意。

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