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【新通外语独家】2015年01月29日雅思写作范文
Writing Task 1:
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Writing Task 2:
Nowadays, both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
开头段
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改写题目,说明现在流行的趋势就是去边远地区旅游和做研究
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主体段
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可分为三段,可以两边写,也可以一边倒。此文中采取的两边写,即利弊都写。
第一段:第一个利,科学家能够挖掘当地资源,解决资源短缺问题
第二段:第二个利,游客认识到对当地环境保护的重要性,会自觉保护
第三段:写不好的方面,太多人去会对当地环境造成破坏
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结尾段
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简单陈述以利的方面,加上一个前提
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As remote natural places are expected to have plenty of mysteries and resources, there is a growing tendency that both scientists and tourists become involved and interested in setting foot in these spots. In my point of view, the advantages of this development overtake its drawbacks.
To begin with the first benefit, scientists who go to distant natural environments can help deal with an unprecedented resource problem, which can only be tackled by discovering and mining new resources in uncleared areas .These scientists often conduct ground investigation in these remote areas where natural resources, such as coal, oil, are abundant. For example, South pole is known as the container of huge coal and gas reserve. As a result, local resources can be exploited to cater for the use for all the human beings and thus solve some extreme resource urgency in the globe .
Furthermore, tourists traveling around these distant uncontaminated places may realize the fragility and purity of local environment and call for more people to protect its natural scenery.These places are usually out of pollution and are so breathtaking that people are deeply impressed and shocked. Thereafter, these tourists may launch awareness campaign to protect local environment of their own accord.For example, they may raise funds to plant more trees in case of destructive debris flow in local areas.
However, it should be noted that the more people go to these remote unspoiled places, the more harm people may cause to the local environment. Since they have to consume local resources to survive, like logging woods to make fire, these behaviors pose threat to local fragile ecosystem. Sometimes, they may even make such irretrievable mistakes, such as excessive development of resources, that local natural culture is at the edge of extinction. However, this irreparable destruction can be avoided provided that these people are educated decent behaviors before stepping in local land.
To sum up, it is advocated that scientists and tourists visiting these remote natural areas can help tap local natural resources potential and enable more people to have a clear perspective of local natural culture, on condition that they take proper measures and cause least harm to local ecosystem.
相关词伙;
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词汇/短语 |
词义 |
词性 |
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become involved in |
使卷入 |
v |
2 |
unprecedented |
空前的 |
adj |
3 |
mining |
采矿 |
v |
4 |
uncleared areas |
未开垦的地区 |
n |
5 |
conduct ground investigation |
地质勘测 |
v |
6 |
resource urgency |
资源紧缺 |
n |
7 |
uncontaminated |
未被污染 |
adj |
8 |
fragility |
脆弱 |
n |
9 |
breathtaking |
令人激动的 |
adj |
10 |
launch awareness campaign |
开展宣传活动 |
v |
11 |
of their own accord |
自愿 |
adv |
12 |
debris flow |
泥石流 |
n |
13 |
irretrievable |
无可挽回的 |
adj |
14 |
excessive development |
过度开发 |
n |
15 |
at the edge of extinction |
灭绝边缘 |
n |
16 |
irreparable destruction |
不可挽回的破坏 |
n |
17 |
have a clear perspective of |
有清晰的了解 |
v |
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