2014年11月1日雅思写作解析及范文

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Task 1 A类小作文：两个柱状图。第一个 比较 Australia and China 的进口与出口。第二个澳大利亚从中国进口的货物。

解析：第一个柱状图为动态图型，第二个柱状图为静态图形，此次考试为组合图形，难度适中。词汇扩充：favorable balance of trade贸易顺差

There are two given bar charts describing some data on the value of goods that Australia imported from China between and those exported to China from Australia between 1998 and 2004; another chart reveals the types of goods imported from China in 2003 and 2004.

As can be seen from the first figure, the value of goods that Australia imported from China was more than those exported to China from Australia during this period. To be more specific, in 1998, the worth of goods imported from China was $ 20 billion, which doubled the exported from Australia. From then on, the data on imported from China rocketed, peaking at $ 40 billion in 2004. Although the value of exported goods to China had a similar upward trend, it did not outweigh the imported goods from China ( $ 30 billion in 2004).

In terms of the second chart, obviously, computers and furniture were the most popular goods in 2003($5billion); while others like toys, sports and telecommunication equipments were similar with $2 billion and $3 billion respectively. After one year, there were some great changes. Among them, telecommunication equipment ranked the first with $ 8 billion, closely followed by that of toys and sports equipment ( $7 billion). Compared with them, computers and furniture kept a stable rise, both of which reached $6 billion. Regarding clothes, it evened out during this time with $4 billion.

Taken all together, China was this country which maintained a favorable balance of trade during this time.

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A类大作文：it is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy。agree or disagree？

思路解析：本题属于社会类话题

不同意的观点：

1）从钱的角度考虑：即使不喜欢，但是可以通过工作获得一定的薪酬；

2）从能力的角度考虑：培养适应能力，即使不喜欢，但是通过在这个地方工作可以培养自己 的适应能力.克服困难，最后获得成功；

3）让步：从心理角度考虑，如果员工长时间在不喜欢的环境中工作很容易产生抑郁的情绪，从而影响工作甚至生活；但是谁也不能保证下一份工作会适合自己，可能还会浪费时间和精力。

So fierce is the competition that a growing number of people have no enough time and energy to choose jobs via their interests; even, some are employed by those jobs which they do not enjoy. According to this, a view springs up that individuals employed by this kind of job are worse than unemployed people. As for me, this idea is unconvincing.

Most tellingly, plenty of money can be gained by this way, even if they do not like. Simply put, although people can feel unhappy during this time, their basic life can be ensured. After all, some necessities, like food or clothes, are needed to be purchased by doing this work. As is generally believed, quite a few people are living in a poor condition; what’s worse, the employment rate is decreasing sharply recently; thus, finding a job has become increasingly difficult. If a person wants to hunt for a satisfied job, not only do plenty of time and energies need to be consumed, but more significantly, they could not obtain enough money to afford their life. Due to this, even if this job they do not enjoy, the fact is cruel.

On the top of that, some abilities and precious experience can be obtained in the long run. To be more specific, if people let them adapt this environment by doing this work, they can overcome more difficulties in the future. For instance, Frank Baker who is one of the most famous salesmen in the world did not like his job at the beginning, but he insisted to observe and chose to adapt and made success at last. From this case, we can understand the fact that insistence and adaptability are rather vital.

Undeniably, employees can feel unhappy during this time and they may complain everything for their work. What’s worse, this situation can have some adverse effect on their daily life, which can cause some problems like lack of confidence and insistence. However, no one can believe the next job is better. May be this job can waste people’s time and energy, which can cause those people who are always switch their jobs frequently in the future.

Taken all together, reasonable as this perspective that individuals should choose their favorite job seems, I still deem that getting enough money, valuable skills and experience are more reasonable.

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