2014年9月4日雅思写作深度解析及原创范文

2014年9月4日雅思写作题目：

Now people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose with improved communication technology and transport. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 很多国家的人可以工作生活在任何地方，因为有了交通和交流技术的便利，是否认为利大于弊?(2009年雅思写作旧题重现)

题目解析：主题论证的是候鸟生活和异地工作的利弊，前题条件是交流交通技术的提高(网络和飞机)

主题观点：候鸟生活以及异地工作的利大于弊。

相关提问：

1. Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them.　Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages? 很多父母现在在异国他乡工作，会带上自己的家庭(联想老人和孩子);是否利大于弊?(2013年10月19日雅思考试写作题目)

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2. An amount of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their lives. Is this positive or negative to development?很多人在一生中不断改变自己的居住地以及工作，是好还是不好?(2011年11月19日雅思写作题目)

3. An increasing number people are changing careers during the working life what do you think the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 很多人一生中不断地改变他们的职业，原因何在?你认为是消极的还是积极的? (2014年6月21日雅思写作题目)

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首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场
　　One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their dream jobs and places of residence. Thanks to the improvement of modern public transport and communication technology, many young adults are usually magnetized by splendid job opportunities and modernized lifestyle in new cities. People have been pondering for years the pros and cons of migrant lifestyle bought about by the high-tech without reaching any definite consensus. Personally, the merits of free job selection prevail over its possible downsides(86)

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二段：利好的展开，写作利好时，以科技的便利引出才会紧扣主题。

Granted, with the availability of new technology, people may get a reasonable career in any favorite cities without concerning about regional limits. No matter where one dwells in, he or she can keep contact with their family members via the Internet or airplane timely. Seen from positive aspects, a number of benefits can be acquired. The most glaring merit is that multiple career choice and constant change of residence means a broad range of working experience and constant refreshment. Meanwhile, one can become more versatile and well-informed by embarking on manifold jobs or living in different cities. Also, regular change of jobs makes one excel professionally and living in different cities greatly enriches one’s experience of the world. Hence, one can embrace brighter career and enjoy precious memory in the future. Last，to take up jobs in diverse cities enables one to enlarge his or her circle of friends so that one could establish well-connected interpersonal network. A better personal resource, to some extent, means more golden chances of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the room for career achievement.(180)

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三点：弊端的展开本段写作候鸟生活和异地工作的两个弊端

Nonetheless, some problems might ensue. Initially, the decomposition of family bonds is an inevitable risk due to the spatial separation. Imaginably, the face-to-face opportunities of communicating with family and friends will be diminished if people live too far. Besides, every individual should assume the obligation of getting married and startting his career, it might be hard for people to obtain the sense of happiness and secure stable life if they change place of working too quickly. (77)

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