2014年7月26日雅思写作真题解析及高分范文

大作文：Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

高分范文——

Those who accept that environmental problems cannot be solved by individuals argue that this  is a global issue that  requires cooperation from the international community. Addressing such environmental problems as global warming necessitates concerted actions by all the countries and sharing of cutting-edge technology  in an endeavor to relieve the level of pollutants caused by human activities. Furthermore, the responsibility of solving environmental problems  should rest with the government rather than the individuals because such issues, intimately linked with rapid advancement of industries and explosive growth of population, can simply be approached by the government.

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The argument in favor of the individuals’ necessary contribution to solving environmental problems is that much of the pollution, in many cases, rises from individuals’ everyday activities. The environment is being gravely contaminated by the exhausted emission released from modern technological products such as automobile and air-conditioner when we enjoy comfort and convenience brought to us by them. Moreover, the environmental pollution is aggravated by willful throwing about of wastes or litters produced in everyday life due to lack of awareness of environmental protection. Individuals, therefore, play a pivotal part in protecting environment from being polluted. Only when individuals are willing to undertake their due responsibility for the environment, can the issue be ultimately solved.

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小作文：（表格图） The table shows the total length of high speed train tracks in three countries in 1990、2010 and the prediction for 2020.  

真题解析及高分范文——

首段：
　　The given table illustrates a breakdown of ……，in general ……
　　点评：
　　句型引导，表述图表信息，概括图表明显信息：
　　illustrate v 图表描述……
　　breakdown n数据分类（特别适合表格题）

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　　二段：
　　Consulting from the given chart, it is clear that ……， …… by contrast ……，again，after comparison, it seems that ……， what noteworthy is that ……
　　点评：
　　小作文可以横向对比，纵向对比，分类对比，数据比较可从最大数据对比写作最小数据，数据的相等，倍数，一半为特殊点，需要特殊强调。
　　after comparison, it seems that ……经过对比，似乎是……（经典衔接词）
　　what noteworthy is that ……值得注意的是…… (经典衔接词)：

　　三段：
　　Overall，……

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