2014年7月12号托福写作考情解析

综合写作：

讲的是一种昆虫很喜欢吃玉米，文章说有三种方法来消灭它。分别是1.用除虫剂，2.早点种玉米，3.把玉米和大豆轮流种。听力反驳。1.除虫剂只是一段时间内起作用因为昆虫会有抗药性，2.过早种玉米会被霜雪天气毁掉，3.昆虫可以延迟一年从卵出来，所以出来还是会吃玉米

独立作文：

09.01.23 NA

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

Sample answer：

When I was in college, I held several jobs working for others, such as a waiter in restaurant, a dishwasher, and a food delivery guy. Generally, many young people take several different kinds of jobs when they first come into the community. I believe this is unavoidable; because most young people graduate from college with no work experience, they do not know what type of career they want to pursue. Therefore, if someone asked me, “Do you think that young people should take several different kinds of jobs before they pursue a long-term career?” my answer would be an absolute “Yes.” I believe that gaining experience by working several different jobs before pursuing a long-term career is beneficial and indispensable to people’s lifetime careers for several reasons.

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First, young people can acquire much knowledge and many skills by working several jobs, no matter how unremarkable they are. For example, by working as a cashier in a supermarket, I could learn about what people buy, which would be valuable information if I later pursued a marketing career. So whatever you do, do your best, as any job could lead to your future success.    

Second, working several jobs helps young people mature as they gain valuable experience and make many friends. A friend of mine whose major was electronic engineering had worked as a purchasing assistant before, responsible for purchasing various kinds of electronic equipment, so he knew which kind of instrument is best for which kind of work. He went on to apply for a position as an electronic engineer for another employer who was satisfied with his former experience as a purchasing assistant, so he got the job that a lot of people want. He tells me all the time that if he had not had that purchasing experience, he would not have gotten the job that he has now.

We must strive to do our best at any temporary job, as gaining experience is indispensable preparation for our lifetime career. We can utilize the knowledge, techniques, and experience we acquire while working a short-term job to assist us when we pursue our long-term career. I therefore believe that young people should work several different jobs to obtain experience before they identify and pursue their lifetime career.

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