2014年6.21托福独立写作机经包括写作思路拓展与范文示例。。。
6.21托福独立写作机经思路扩展:
不同意的理由:
1. 在紧急时刻,立即行动能让我们抓住机会,减少损失。
2. 但是在做重要决定时,我们需要耐心,慎重考虑
参考答案
When it comes to the controversial issue of being patient or taking actions at once, each individual tends to hold various perspectives. Taking all the circumstances into consideration, I choose to disagree with the statement that patience is usually not a good thing and we need to take an action at once because I believe it is the right way to deal with everything to take actions immediately when faced with emergencies and think twice before we make significant decisions.
When we take emergencies into consideration, people always take action right away without any hesitation,which could come from their instincts. In china, there are so many warm-hearted reports on the daily news. Last week, my neighbor uncle Liu, who suffers inborn mental disorder, was lost. His families were worried that he would meet any accidents or be abducted by strangers. In the evening, a friendly public bus driver took him home and told us that uncle Li was walking on the road without any safe precautions and forgot how to get back home. And the driver watched TV news and aided him to return. After the interview, the kind driver just said that it was his pleasure and obligation to do and didn't think about any rewards before taking action. Hence,to deal with such kinds of emergencies, it is better to take actions without any hesitance.
However, when faced with a crucial option instead of an emergency, patience should come the first place. For example, three years ago, the time I would choose the university,it took my families and I one week to determine among three universities.After considering for a long time,
Hunan university is my final decision. And thinking about the past, the college must be my best choice I have ever made and it offers me much surprising I cannot imagine in my highschool.
Without the serious-minded consideration. the outcome would be the opposite. Hence, when people are faced with a significant event, pondering the probable results and analyzing the factors cannot be ignored
In sum up, to adapt to the rapid speed of the modernization in China, keeping the balance between the patience and rapidness is vital. it is the right way to deal with everything to take actions immediately when faced with emergencies and think twice before we make significant decisions.
6.21托福独立写作机经1
Is there a good reason to be impolite(rude) to another person?
6.21托福独立写作机经2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
6.21托福独立写作机经3
The car has had a greater effect on society than the airplane.
思路扩展:
同意的理由:
汽车比飞机对社会的影响时间更长。
汽车比飞机对社会的影响范围更广,程度更深。
独立写作的范文:
Although the invention of the airplane did revolutionize the world's long-distance travelling,what has really changed the way people live would be the car. In terms of the impact on society,the automobile would not be replaced by the airplane, as if the horse having been replaced by the automobile. To explain the importance of the motorized vehicles on ground transportation over that of the flying vehicles, one has only to decide which one would be more difficult to do without.
The airplane became the symbol of the twentieth century, as did the automobile in the nineteenth century. The flying vehicle is shrinking the planet to the point that a person can fly anywhere in the world in a matter of hours. Not only have modern jet planes made travel fast and safe, but also they have provided many other services that could be of help to society. The benefits range from crop dusting to fighting forest fires to overnight delivery of packages and merchandise to chasing hurricanes. Also, the impact of the aviation technology has redefined the warfare, turning battle into a long-range affair fought at arm's length. In view of these advantages, it seems
hard to do without the airplane.
Nevertheless, it seems even harder to do without the automobile. To begin with, mathematics matters. The number of motorized vehicles far exceeds that of flying vehicles by hundreds of millions, which may serve to explain the over-riding effects of engine carts on wheel over the routine lives of the most people. Once the automobile became a practical and reliable source of transportation in the past century, it changed almost everything world-wide. The horse and cart began to disappear gradually while much of the country was paved over to make room for endless ribbons of asphalt. Among other things, the automobile has brought about obvious economic effects, making it possible to truck in goods that would otherwise be difficult to acquire. More than the airplane, the automobile gives people such a degree of mobility and personal freedom as never before seen.
In comparing the influence of both types of transportation, the automobile appears to be more important than the airplane since it affects more people's lives more directly. Without the automobile, it is no doubt unpleasant to imagine using the horse and cart again, particularly during the summer heat with intolerable odor and manure. However, without the airplane, people could still dream to fly anytime.
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