雅思写作讲座——寻找观点支持句（二）

  上一篇我们讲到了>>，这里将给各位考生简单介绍写好观点支持据的注意事项，以及雅思写作热门观点支持句。

写观点支持句的注意事项：

（1）分清观点句与事实句。观点句具有主观性，因人而异；而事实句是真理，得到所有人的认同。

（2）观点支持句不要太笼统，也不能太具体。太笼统会导致目标不集中，很难做到论证有力；太具体会使得文章难以展开，导致字数不够。

（3）观点支持句不要太多，两三个就够了。

雅思写作热门话题观点支持句

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. Therefore, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities to help the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
 
　　正方观点的支持句：

① The aid from developed countries is of great benefit to common people in needy countries. International aid optimizes people’s living standard and eradicates poverty in the poor countries.
　　点评：needy 一词代替了原文中的poorer, optimize为词汇的亮点，意为“使得更加完善”。

② The aid from rich countries provides good medical care and helps promote the development of education, agriculture and economy.
　　点评：既然题目中提及到了教育和医疗，论述的过程中一定要有所体现。

③ Mutual assistance enhances friendship between countries, which helps get rid of the possibility of wars due to misunderstanding.
　　点评：enhance一词在雅思作文中会经常用到，比如：enhance efficiency; enhance security; enhance sense of solidarity.

反方观点的支持句：

① Financial aid from rich countries is often given out of political reasons. If you want to receive the aid, you have to accept political conditions combined with it.

② Aid from rich countries is just a disguised way to exploit cheap natural resources and get great benefits from poverty-stricken countries.
　　点评：poverty-stricken为词汇的亮点，意为“为贫穷所困扰的”。

③ It must be stressed out that there exists a potential danger of the abuse of the beneficence by some corrupt governmental officials and inefficient administration.
　　点评：beneficence为国际援助话题必备词汇，意为“捐助物资”。

关于太空探索的话题

Some people say that exploration of outer space has many advantages; other people feel that it is a waste of money and other resources. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

正方观点支持句：

① Man has the instinct and curiosity to explore the unknown, outer space exploration could multiply our knowledge about the universe and the earth.

② The earth has a limited amount of natural Resources. One day they will be consumed up, so we need to explore untapped energy and resources for mankind to survive.

③ New habitation may be found for human beings to solve the problem of overpopulation. There is possibility that one day mankind may emigrate to other planets.

反方观点支持句：

① Space exploration makes the money fly, for it has consumed large sums of money and precious and limited resources with any worthwhile return.

　　② We have more pressing social problems that ought to give priority to, outer space exploration can not alleviate the agonies of millions of people who are suffering from poverty, disease and starvation.
　　
　　③ The real interest of nations with space technology lies in the manifestation of both their technological and military power.

关于单一职业选择还是多元化职业选择的话题

Some people prefer to stay in the same jor for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

单一职业选择的好处：

① Regular job-hopper’s honesty and loyalty may be questioned. On the contrary, keeping employed in one single career is an effective way to get job-promotion as well as ensure the stability of one’s life.

② You may become a veteran of the field and earn respect or prestige from others if you focus on a single career with all your heart.点评：veteran为词汇的亮点，意为“经验丰富的人”。

③ You can establish intensive social connections related to this field, helping you tear down most of the barriers standing in the way of your working endeavor.

为何要多元化职业选择：

① Job-hopping is a human instinct to see changes, a yearning to work with different people and a desire for divergent job duties.点评：yearning为词汇的亮点，意为“渴望”。

② Regular change of jobs enables employers to obtain more professional skills and enhance their teamwork spirit by means of changing their jobs.

③ In this competitive and ever-accelerated world, more and more people can no longer be dependent on a single career.

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