托福写作2013年精选 2014不再那么难

2013年1月13日独立作文题目：It is important tomake sure that others(influential people orpotential employers)know about your strengths andaccomplishments;if you are not so,you will be neversuccessful in life.

1月26机经

综合写作：

The American burying beetle population decline

文章有三个原因，

第一个是farmer用杀虫药

第二个是人们开发土地破坏了这种beetle的栖息地，

第三个原因是另一种动物和它争食

听力，教授驳斥

1.farmer用杀虫药用之前就减少了

2.其他类似栖息地的beetle怎么都没少呢

3.这种American burying beetle有发达的嗅觉系统，可以发现很远地方的食物，而且他们把得到的食物藏到地下，而且还会散发化学物质防止食物气味散发出来被其他动物发现

独立写作：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today are morelikely to help others than young people in the past.

以上就是1月26日托福写作机经整理，希望各位考友合理利用机经，认真备考，获得一个自己理想的成绩。

考试日期： 2013.01.27

Task 1

INTEGRAED 关于saber-toothed cat（剑齿猫）是否是群居动物。

阅读文章要点：saber-toothed cat是群居动物

1. Fossils of saber-toothed cats with broken bones indicate that they were fed by other saber-toothed cats when they were injured.

2. There are large numbers of saber-toothed cats in the trap. The saber-toothed cats hunted together. The sound of dears in the trap attracted them to fall in the trap together.

3. Saber-toothed cats lived with other predators such as lions and wolves. Saber-toothed cat shave to live in group to compete with those predators.

听力逐一反驳：

1. The fossils of saber-toothed cats with broken bones indeed indicate that they could survive when they were injured. However it doesn’t necessarily mean that they have to be fed by other saber-toothed cats. Many predators can find dead animals to eat. So did the saber-toothed cats.

2. The large numbers of saber-toothed cats in the trap doesn’t mean that they hunt together.The saber-toothed cats hunted separately. One of the saber-toothed cats heard the sound of the trapped dear, went to the trap and fell. Then another saber-toothed cat also heard the sound of the trapped dear, came to the trap and fell again.

3. Saber-toothed cats were large predators. Take tigers for example, one tiger is strong enough to fight against the social predators such as lions and wolves. So the saber-toothed cats don’t have to live together to compete with lions and wolves.

Task 2 INDEPENDENT 独立写作

话题类别 社会类

考题文字： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The place you choose to live has a greater effect on your overall happiness than your job does.

本次写作考试点评：

本次新托福写作重复2012.09.21北美考题。本次考题不在预测范围中，但是题目的难度总体而言适中，尤其是独立写作，是有关工作和生活的，非常简单。相对较难的是综合任务，是有关考古的，词汇量和背景知识对考生的要求较高，听力和阅读完全融合的难度较大。考生要特别关注2012年下半年的北美考题，以防出现类似的重复规律。

2013年7月13日

讲解：

借东西，借吃的、用的、

帮忙照看孩子，盖房子，

同意

1. 高科技的发展使得邻居的作用不明显

2. 生活节凑的加快，大家都很忙，没有时间聊天，一起做东西

3. 物质生活的丰富，人们买的起所有的东西

住房，高层，邻居的联系变少

不同意

7月20号机经

综合写作：

综合写作：Eocene warming产生原因的3个理论(水流方向的改变、comet、mathane)，听力材料反对(1、虽然能产生一点效果，但是很小，电脑监测上看来传递的热量非常少;2、new reseach认为mageneticparticle是bateria产生的不是comet strike earth产生的;3、mathane产生效果要thousands of year，但是warming和mathane escape是同时发生的。)大概是这样，应该没错。

综合写作是第一是ocean current改变方向导致，第二是comet theory第三是methane escape

第一个是说Atlantic Ocean的current改变了方向，把transport heat from tropical to the poles，听力说虽然可以使温度提升但是经过computer model测算影响相当小

第二个是说彗星撞地球而且有magnetic particles的证据证明确实撞了。听力说那magnetic particlecomes from a one celled organism，比如说细菌，所以证据不成立

第三个说the release of methane，发生greenhouse effect，使温度上升。听力说methane充满atmosphere 并且cause greenhouse effect需要thousand of years但是geological evidence证明甲烷释放和温度上升是同时发生的，所以也不行。

独立写作：

2013年7月20日托福独立写作题目：Parents spend too much time to help their children todetermine their future; children should be allowed to make choices on their own.重复2009年8月7日北美考题。

Nowadays parents apend too much time on determining the future of their children,childrenshould be allowed to make their own decision.很多家长帮助孩子决定他们的未来，孩子需要自己做决定。

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