托福写作开头段重要性之错误解析

我们经常说好的开始是成功的一半，但是一个坏的开头也能毁掉一篇文章。托福写作是中国考生的一个难点，中西文化差异一直困扰着考生，所以在写作时要将心中所想用英文表达出来，一定要注意以下几个问题。

过分简单没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用词不当，表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆

典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

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