AI搜索累计解答了369位高考生的升学问题

咨询时间:8:00~24:00 400-618-8866

您的位置: 首页> 考培资讯> 托福> 写作> 实例讲解新托福独立写作思路拓展

实例讲解新托福独立写作思路拓展

关键字  托福 独立写作 作文 写作思路 托福考试
2013-12-12 来源:互联网 作者: 阅读量: 52 手机阅读

导读

许多考生面对托福独立写作的题目,匆匆下笔,没有掌握整个英语作文论述的逻辑,从而导致低分。下文以2011年12月17日北美新托福考试的独立写作真题为例,讲解独立写作的解题流程和思路拓展,帮助大家提高语言表达和组句能力。

许多考生面对托福独立写作的题目,匆匆下笔,没有掌握整个英语作文论述的逻辑,从而导致低分。下文以2011年12月17日北美新托福考试的独立写作真题为例,讲解独立写作的解题流程和思路拓展,帮助大家提高语言表达和组句能力。

首先,考生会看到关于第二题的题目说明:

Task 2: Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience

Directions: For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, explain, and support your opinion on an issue.

Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of your essay, and the quality and accuracy of the language you use to express your ideas.

You have 30 minutes to plan and complete your essay.

然后,电脑屏幕上将出现题目要求、答题框以及字数统计,左下角还会出现30分钟倒计时显示。本题题目如下:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is impossible to be completely honest with your friends.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

1. 快速破题,明确观点

看到题目后,首先明确观点,即“同意”还是“不同意”,如:

I agree that it is impossible to be totally honest with your friends.

当然,不能在第一句就“交底”,否则首段就没什么可写了。因此,从题干中找核心词,以此为突破口慢慢引出中心论点。如本题题干的核心词为honest和friends,那么不妨先说说自己对这两个词的认识,即:我觉得……

2. 首段(Introduction)的思路拓展

先进行铺垫:

Friends make the good times even better, and keep the bad times from overwhelming us.

然后以设问方式进行过渡:

One trait of a lasting friendship is honesty, but how honest must one be?

引出中心论点:

I believe that it is impossible to remain totally honest with our friends all the time.

解释中心论点:

We must not only protect their feelings and interests, but also keep our own secrets.

以上述方式展开的首段逻辑性很强。更重要的是,大家拿到一道独立写作题知道如何思考,并将“头脑风暴”后的想法进行流畅地表达.

3. 中间段落(Essay Body)的思路拓展

Paragraph 1

先阐明本段论点,即过于坦诚会伤及别人:

To begin with, truth can be like a sword that breaks people’s hearts instead of protecting them.

变化措辞解释一下这个论点:

In other words, telling someone the truth may break their heart.

因此有时候需要保持沉默:

There are some situations that require us to adopt sensible silence because as a good friend, I feel obliged to support and always stand behind my friend.

举例,以“假设+ 结论”的方式展开,更有说服力:

If your friend is not good-looking and there is nothing you can do to change that, maybe it’s better to just keep quiet and protect his or her feelings.

继续举例,仍以“假设+ 结论”的方式展开:

Similarly, when our friends date someone we don’t like, if this person is not actually harmful to our friends, maybe we should let the relationship run its course.

总结:

Therefore, being totally honest is not possible because we must protect our friends and their feelings.

Paragraph 2

提出本段论点,即应该保守自己的秘密:

In addition to protecting our friends by withholding information, we must also be careful to protect our own secrets.

解释论点,即有些个人私事是不方便对他人说的:

Friends sometimes share secrets with each other, but when it comes to some personal matters which we want to keep to ourselves, it is better not to share our secrets.

举例说明什么样的事“我”不会实话实说:

For example, in a game called “truth or dare”, am I supposed to say who I have a crush on in front of many other friends? By no means would I tell the truth.

总结:

Again, everyone has some private matters which they cannot tell anyone. So we should keep a certain distance in our relationships, even with our closest friends.

4. 末段(Conclusion)的思路拓展

首先重申中心论点:

Total honesty makes no practical sense in the real world.

具体到友情,再次阐明上文提到的不能完全诚实的原因:

In regard to friendships, we sometimes have to lie or keep silent in order to protect our friends’ feelings and protect our secrets.

总结:

Tact and consideration of others’ feelings is more important in a friendship than unwavering honesty.

  • 有疑问在线咨询老师

    咨询时间:0:00 ~ 24:00
    非咨询时间也可留言

  • 400-618-8866

    咨询时间:8:00 ~ 24:00

定制备考方案
留学快读通道

课程推荐

更多课程+
鏆傛棤鐩稿叧璇剧▼鎺ㄨ崘

新通为您定制更适合您的学习方案

想要获取更多考试培训信息,可以通过以下方式联系到距离您最近的新通教育;

1、拨打新通教育咨询热线:400-618-8866;

2、点击【立即咨询】 ,我们会有课程老师为你解答考试难题;

3、完成以下表单,轻松预约,预约获取定制学习方案的机会。

姓名
联系电话
城市
  • 杭州
  • 北京
  • 上海
  • 广州
  • 深圳
  • 南京
  • 武汉
  • 苏州
  • 太原
  • 济南
  • 合肥
  • 天津
  • 郑州
  • 长春
  • 宁波
  • 舟山
  • 温州
  • 温岭
  • 成都
  • 重庆
  • 西安
  • 南昌
  • 厦门
  • 福州
学习科目
  • 雅思
  • 托福
  • SAT
  • ACT
  • GRE
  • GMAT
  • 国际高中备考班
  • A-level
  • AP
马上预约

定制学习方案

  • 雅思
  • 托福
  • SAT
  • ACT
  • GRE
  • GMAT
  • 国际高中备考班
  • A-level
  • AP
获取你的学习方案

*温馨提示:新通承诺绝不泄露您的个人信息

大家都在看

更多>
  • 鏆傛棤鐩稿叧鏂伴椈锛�
閸︺劎鍤庨崪銊嚄
鐎规艾鍩�
閼板啳鐦€涳缚绡勯弬瑙勵攳
  •  閹劎娈戞慨鎾虫倳閿涳拷

    鐠囧嘲锝為崘娆愬亶閻ㄥ嫬顫橀崥锟�!

  •  鐎涳缚绡勭粔鎴犳窗閿涳拷

    鐠囩兘鈧瀚ㄩ幃銊ф畱鐎涳缚绡勭粔鎴犳窗!

  •  閼昏精顕㈤崺铏诡攨閿涳拷

    鐠囩兘鈧瀚ㄩ幃銊ф畱閼昏精顕㈤崺铏诡攨!

  •  鐎涳缚绡勯弮鍫曟?閿涳拷

    鐠囩兘鈧瀚ㄩ幃銊ф畱鐠囶叀鈻堥幋鎰摋!

  • *閹劎娈戦悽浣冪樈閿涳拷

    鐠囩柉绶崗銉﹀亶閻ㄥ嫯浠堢化鑽ゆ暩鐠囷拷!

    鐠囩柉绶崗銉︻劀绾喚娈戦悽浣冪樈閸欓鐖�!

  • 閼惧嘲褰囨宀冪槈閻拷

    鐠囩柉绶崗銉╃崣鐠囦胶鐖�!

    妤犲矁鐦夐惍渚€鏁婄拠锟�!

閹绘劒姘�

閸忋劌娴楅崪銊嚄閻戭厾鍤�

400-618-8866

閼板啳鐦張澶屾瀿闂傤噯绱�
  • 閹靛婧€鐠囬娲块幒銉ㄧ翻閸忋儻绱版俊锟�1860086xxxx

    鎼囱勬簚閸撳秴濮為崠鍝勫娇閿涙艾顩�0105922xxxx

    鏉堟挸鍙嗛幃銊ф畱閻絻鐦介崣椋庣垳閿涘瞼鍋i崙濠氣偓姘崇樈閿涘瞼鈼㈤崥搴㈠亶鐏忓棙甯撮崚鐗堝灉娴狀剛娈戦弶銉ф暩閿涘矁顕氶柅姘崇樈鐎佃鍋�鐎瑰苯鍙忛崗宥堝瀭閿涳拷鐠囬攱鏂佽箛鍐╁复閸氼剨绱�

  • 閻愮懓鍤す顑跨瑐閸ョ偟鏁�

閸忋劌娴楅崪銊嚄閻戭厾鍤�

400-618-8866

妫板嫮瀹崇拠鏇炴儔鐠囧墽鈻�
  • 鐠囧嘲锝為崘娆愬亶閻ㄥ嫬顫橀崥锟�!

  • 鐠囩兘鈧瀚ㄩ幃銊ф畱閼昏精顕㈤崺铏诡攨!

  • 鐠囩兘鈧瀚ㄩ幃銊ф畱閻㈠疇顕€涳箑宸�!

  • 鐠囩柉绶崗銉﹀亶閻ㄥ嫮鏁哥拠锟�!

    鐠囩柉绶崗銉︻劀绾喚娈戦悽浣冪樈閸欓鐖�!

  • 鐠囩柉绶崗銉╃崣鐠囦胶鐖�!

    妤犲矁鐦夐惍渚€鏁婄拠锟�!

    閼惧嘲褰囨宀冪槈閻拷
  • 妫板嫮瀹崇拠鏇炴儔

閸忋劌娴楅崪銊嚄閻戭厾鍤�

400-618-8866

閸忋劌娴楅崪銊嚄閻戭厾鍤�

400-618-8866

閹劎娈戠拠鍕強閻㈠疇顕鍙夊灇閸旂喐褰佹禍锟�

閺備即鈧矮绗撴稉姘斥偓浣哥瑎鐏忓棗婀稉鈧稉顏勪紣娴f粍妫╅崘鍛板毀閻㈤潧娲栫拋锟�
鐠囬攱鏁為幇蹇斿复閸氾拷

閸忔娊妫撮幐澶愭尦
  • 婵挸鎮�
  • 閹靛婧€閸欙拷
  • 閹碘偓閸︺劌鐓勭敮锟�
  • 閸忓秷鍨傛0鍡楀絿
閻愮懓鍤崷鏉挎絻缁斿宓嗘稉瀣祰閳ユ粍鏌婇柅姘辨殌鐎涳妇銇滈崠鍛偓婵撶磼閸忔娊妫撮幐澶愭尦
閻ф儳瀹崇純鎴犳磸闁剧偓甯撮敍锟�https://pan.baidu.com/s/1r5g2S6Fqg40QI0Sr03OddA 鐎靛棛鐖�: d1j8