你会分段和过渡吗？不要让混乱行文拉低的你分数

托福写作中，段落安排是否合理，段落过渡是否流畅自然是判断一篇文章好坏的重要关键点。段落安排不合理的文章其内在的逻辑顺序必然是不清晰的，而段落过渡不自然的文章亦如生锈的拉链，读起来不顺畅。处理好这两方面，会让你的分数有质的提高。

1.会分段。要清楚自己的行文思路，知道自己有几个论点。首段表明论点，废话不要讲。论证一段一个论点，不可以交叉。一个论段里要有论点句，其它所有句子都为论证这个点，废话不要讲。尾段总结论点共性，映证首段观点，废话也不要多。

2.会过渡。要记住必须过渡。要明白你为什么过渡-----如果这个过渡不证明论点和论题间的关系，而证明论点间的关系，要确定这个新论点也能证明论题。你的过渡不是为自己的文章过渡，而是帮读者的思维过渡，引领他们走进新的思维，所以必须确认过渡的方向，你是否正带着你的读者而离开你的论题。

所以，你还需要一些好的过渡句式替换那些你都已经用烂掉的平凡语句，让你的文章提升质感。

【承上启下】

To understand the truth of...， it is also important to see...

A study of ... will make this point clear

【进行对比】

The advantages for A outweigh the disadvantages of...

Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

Indeed ， A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.

【提出假想例子的方式】

Suppose that...

Just imagine what would be like if...

It is reasonable to expect...

It is not surprising that...

A maybe ... ， but it suffers from the disadvantage that...

【提出原因】

There are many reasons for..

Why ...， for one thing，...

The answer to this problem involves many factors.

Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...

The first reason can be obliviously seen.

Most people would agree that...

Some people may neglect that in fact ...

Others suggest that...

Part of the explanation is ...