语法的问题大多数学生都有，所以改动起来十分困难。那么我一般情况之下就是和学生规定好句型，往里面套词即可。比如TOPIC SENTENCE，很多同学都会写成 sb. can do sth.的形式。
例如这一道题：In modern times, grandparents cannot give their grandchildren useful advice because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.
好多同学都会选择 哎 有用的！还是有用的（因为有用比较好写嘛！！！）那么TOPIC SENTENCE就会给自己很大的压力，可能会这么写：grandparents can give their grandchildren some useful advice because they are more experienced and intelligent to help them develop a bright career in the future.
TS1: To begin with, accepting advice from grandparents is beneficial to improve well-rounded abilities.
TS2: In addition, absorbing grandparents’ advice is conducive to the contribution of individuals’ interpersonal skills.
因为写作是需要有节奏感的，一味的长句子堆砌不仅仅容易出错，还会判定长句过多。简而言之，就是写的太复杂了让人读的累。所以TOPIC SENTENCE只能出现一层关系，就是我的观点有好处1. 那么用的句型是什么呢？TS1我一般设计成非谓语动词开场，丰富了句型又不会显得冗长拖沓，也避免了“人”做主语 所以我用的语法是Doing sth. is beneficial for sb. to do sth. 或者大家也可以用doing sth. allows/stimulates sb. to do sth. 中间的allows和stimulates可以替换成别的动词。
It is widely acknowledged that employees are easily get tired and wandering in mind at work due to the heavy workloads, which causes them to lower the work efficiency sometimes. In this situation, only by requiring them to have a face-to-face communication on a certain subject can they supervise and encourage each other to a large extent. In detail, engaged in the group discussion, people are more likely to express their opinions and ideas actively for the reason that every single one in the discussion has to be concentrated on communicating so as to achieve a better result of a specific project.
For instance, a student from a small town has to spend two hours for walking to school, while a student from a big city only spend twenty minutes to go to school by bus.
For example, students are able to watch some videos, made by super scholars, on Youtube. These videos provide students with experiences of learning and conducive advice of establishing confidence and being well-organized.
For example, my father wished to pursue a career as a programmer after he graduated from university twenty years ago. To achieve his goal, he left his hometown, a tranquil county, and worked hard in Beijing to make a living. He was fortunate enough to begin his career in such a big city. Thanks to the experience he gained from high-tech companies, he got promoted to be a manager in an international IT company. Now, he has secured his dream job and lead a happy and abundant life, which would have been impossible to do if he had lived in the small town.