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托福写作真题以及范文实例

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2020-06-28 来源:新通教育网igo.cn 作者:胡一美 阅读量: 手机阅读

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本期新通教育西安托福老师为同学们讲解托福写作的一下真题,希望能给正在备考托福的同学带来帮助。

雅思真题题目:

Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available to the public. Others people prefer to wait until many people have used them. Which do you prefer?

(1) 及时买

好处:

及时享受科技带来的好处。比如:苹果的最新款手机具备 3-digital touch,人脸识别 facial recognition; face identity. 让user 不用双手就可以使用手机,很方便。

及时买的坏处:

1. 容易造成攀比. (炫耀show off;攀比:jealous; keep up with Joneses. 这个点很容易想到,但是很多同学都不太会写 “攀比”;所以 不建议大家写这个点 )

2. 刚买还容易被偷。刚出的新品,很容易引起关注,而被买不起的人偷。+ 举例:我之前买的ipad 就被偷了…

(2) 以后买

好处

1. cheaper. 因为以上市场的产品都比较贵。过一段时间,当货品供应充足了,就会便宜很多. (这个思路大家如果想不明白为什么,可以不用解释。因为确实是一个公认的事实。着重举例)比如苹果的iphone4 产品。一开始卖6000,半年后就4000的多了。

2. 更好用. 因为新出的科技产品一般都会有问题bugs,会造成使用中的很多问题。而过一段时间,当公司从用户使用中发现了这些问题,就会改进,产品就会更好用了。 + 举例:iphone 4 的电池问题

所以,综上所述,好写的观点应该是:选择之后买。

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总观点:以后再买

分论点1: 以后买更便宜。

分论点2: 以后买的产品更好用。

让步:现在买虽然能及时享受带来的好处。但是, 贵/容易被偷/还有些bug. 所以还是以后买更好。

 参考范文:

With the ever accelerating science and technology, people are blessed with a variety of choices in terms of digital products. Some individuals prefer to purchase an electronic device the minute it is launched, while others would rather wait until it becomes cheaper to get it. As for me, I would definitely choose to wait instead of buying the product in a hurry.

To begin with, when a product is initially introduced into the market, its price is inevitably high. Buying the product at this crucial moment is not rational, as far as I am concerned. Though one might become the first few lucky people to be able to fiddle about and get to know its new features, the financial burden it could bring about isovershadowed by its glamorous outlook, not to mention that people who buys it has to suffer from a frugal life style thereafter. Take my friend Jack for example, when iphone 4s was put into the market in 2012, he didn’t hesitate and bought one right after its launch, despite that he had already has an iphone, after he spent almost his entire pocket money on the brand new phone, he had to eat instant noodles for quite a few months. Obtaining new products deprived his leisure activity of going to meet with friends and eat out, now all he does all day is to sit in his apartment, playing with his iphone 4 s, while chewing on some bland instant noodles.

托福写作真题

Secondly, when a new digital device is first introduced to the world, it would be too risky to buy it right away, for chances are that the new products could be stolen. When people see this wonderful new device, they might create a feeling of jealousy, and therefore, the expensive device could end up disappearing. Though the public security nowadays is much safer than it was in the past, however, one cannot be careful in protecting his valuable personal belongings. My friend Daisy has an iphone, yet she has to hold on to her phone tightly right after she steps onto a subway carriage. She dares not leave it in his purse, for fear it could be stolen by pick-pockets.

Last but not least, if I am patient enough and wait for a few months or so, the price of the new products would be greatly lowered, and I could use the money saved to buy some magazines that I love. In addition, there would be a lot of reviews available since more people would have used these products ahead of me, hence, it would be beneficial for me to have some good suggestions from friends or relatives, then I would have a better understanding of the gadgets and enjoy it more after I get it.

To sum up, if given the opportunity, I would not get a digital product as soon as it is available but would rather wait till it’s more popular.

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